Duh duh duh... I was gonna keep reading (and I will), but I just had to write... I can smell an epic in the making... LOL! :)
Alright! <rubs her hands evilly..> New fic for me to read and go ga-ga over (and no, I don't mean the Lady kind). Anywhosiers, I'm already loving it. The interaction between the two you portray is just phenomenal, no matter if it's serious, grief-stricken, humorous, or just casual. Yeah, so off I go. I imagine I'll drop a line here and there, but not every chap just because I'm too excited to quit reading :) Woohoo!
Pebbles (Chapter 12) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
You have no idea the sigh of relief that escaped me when Shippou took a breath. It was unclear how badly wounded he was, so I hoped him to be ok. Glad to see he was givin' a fighting chance thanks to Sessh. Although, I am still worried about Sango. What exactly did he do to her while using her as bait? I hope she's ok.
I enjoyed this. What started as just a 'training' session, turned into a all out advanced lesson on kickin @$$! That seemed like the more logical way of 'awakening' what was within her. It would have to be raw and untaught. This make sense.
And good riddance to Kikyo! Nothing else to say about her.
This is going to be a seriously bloody battle. And really, is there anything that's gonna stop it? Sooooo exciting!
Anonymous (Chapter 37) - Mon 27 Jun 2011
i need more please update! and i cant wait i need to know whats going to happen next(:
Pebbles (Chapter 11) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
How unexpected! Not many times do you see Sango brought into the bigger plot. I like where this is going! You have really gone outside of what I seen in fanfics I've read! I'm just so fascinated by what's going on here. heh Although, I do hope that Shippou is ok. That would make for many sad faces. =\
I appreciate that Kagome is having inner turmoil of her new (yet old) self. It gives you the answers to 'what ifs' and gives it believable stages of growth. I also like that Sesshomaru is the one to assist her, even if he's confused himself. I mean, he didn't teach himself how to be. He just always, was.
Your imagery is beautiful, like usual.
Awesome. U rock.
Pebbles (Chapter 9) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
That was awesome!! There is more to this 'Eldest'! Most definitely. The pace of this was fast but worked. It got the doubts out of Sesshomaru and dare I say...got him into Kagome. (Oh yeah I wrote that)
The whole scene was just perfect for his animalistic nature. It's completely believable. I lover her change, because it didn't come instantly. Bits of it were hanging in the air sort to speak. Like the fight between them was the catalyst.
And the end....HOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!
R u serious?!! I was in my monitor by the end of this chapter. U hear me? IN my monitor.
loved it .... nothin more to say .... except, go Fluffy-sama!
~lily
Pebbles (Chapter 4) - Sat 25 Jun 2011
And that was sheer evil!! lol But I like your style. Plus I'm still behind on chapters so no waitin for me!
Thank you for clarifying the 'invisible' servants. I did at first belived invisible in the physical sense, and am glad I wasn't mistaken.
This is heating up at a good pace. I mean, for her to be out for so long, much pondering had occured on his part. Given that much time alone with his thoughts must have been a slight torture. Her reality has just been seriously altered. I like this concept a lot. Maybe b/c I haven't read as many fics as others, but I've never seen this plot before and I like the direction you're taking with it.
Awesome
Pebbles (Chapter 2) - Sat 25 Jun 2011
Oooooh! Early hints of a intriguing plot! Oh yea.
I also adore stories of Sessomaru acting so 'beastly'. It reminds you of his true nature.
Pebbles (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Jun 2011
I rrrrrrrrreally like this. Your imagery is blowing my mind in some areas. And I'm only at the first chapter!! Woo hoo!!
heh
~~Oh Goody! :D I was delighted to see you updated! Something tells me though that Sesshomaru isn't going to be all that delighted about that kiss though, ne?
Fan Girl (Chapter 37) - Sat 25 Jun 2011
Yay update!
This story just keeps getting better and better! I'm so happy that you allowed things to get patched up with Kouga and that there is no bad blood between them! I have always liked Kouga, and it is so sad when writers make him as the bad guy, when all he has is this cute arrogant way but I think is endearing!
I am itsy bitsy upset that Kagome won't admit her love for Sesshomaru, even he got to recognize it but she is being stubborn! I know that you must have something on your sleeve, but meanwhile I hate to see Sessh knowing what he feels, but not being told that he is loved!
Great chapter! Loved it, so please update soon again! -FG
Kamiki (Chapter 37) - Fri 24 Jun 2011
Awwww Kouga *did* deserve that one kiss. :) I hope Sesshomaru doesn't take it the wrong way though! I would think he's gonna know it happened. >.< Thanks for the update! :)
REDWOLF (Chapter 36) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
Sesshoumaru is like a puzzle. Great chapter!
Ashes (Chapter 35) - Tue 24 May 2011
Wow. This is grade A novel material, if you decided to change some of the names I'm sure you could publish this great work.
I want to commend you for not leaving side stories for too long. (I'm not sure if 'side stories' is the right term, but it's the only term I can think of at the moment) As soon as I was wondering "what happened to Eldest?" or "where the crap did Kasuka go?" you filled me in and impressed me.
My favorite part, to this point, would have to be Shippou and Rin playing 'hunt' in the halls.
Wonderful stuff, I can't wait for the continuation. Good luck.
I just sat and read through your entire story in one sitting and I must say, it is amazing. The imagery in this story is far beyond what I normally find in a fanfiction and it has enthralled me. I find myself waiting, not so patiently, for the next installment. I am very eager to see where your story will progress to. Keep up the wonderful work.
Uh-oh ..... The most vulnerable - She better not be talking about Rin (or Shippo), 'cause if she is - Hell hath no fury like Sessh and Kags, pissed. And I LOVED the bit of lightheartedness from Sesshomaru and Kagome near the end of the chapp, a story can't be all angst and suspense all the time ;) ...... And boy, is Kagome powerfull, Kasuka will have her hands full way past overflowing.
Though, one thing has bugged me for some time since I read that part, is that dream Kagome had of Kasuka a premonition or something. If it is... *shudder*
And, on a lighter note ..... Just how closely was Kinawai wrapped around that feamale? Were the in *caugh*the-most*caugh* intimate embrace? Cause if they were, then youkai society is really lax about some public displays *wink-wink, nudge-nudge*
Can't wait for more XD
~lily
I really don't know what to say but I hate not to review. The problem is that I don't have the words to describe just how wonderfully fantastic this story is. So, I will just say that your recent update was awesome as always and I will be awaiting your next on pins and needles.
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