Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Samantha (Chapter 76) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

Ahhh how sweet and yet funny.  I like how the Katashi says not to mention where he learned the finer points of the birds and the bees lol!  I can't wait for the next chapter thank you for the extra long chapter I love how  you paint such a vivid image in my mind with your discriptive words.  Even you short chapters do the same its like every word you type counts.  I have never read another story where an author could write small passages and yet convey so much. Please update soon!


knifethrower (Chapter 76) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

Wow, wow, wow!!!!!!!!!  This is just getting awesomer and awesomer!


KEdakumi (Chapter 76) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

Ah... a talk of the birds and the bees, or in this case, a talk of the dragons and... something :P  I soooo can't wait for more.  A marking that's started but not finished, maybe?  That could be one more reason that Sess is so cold when he's older and has such a hate of humans.

Please update soon!


Miss Anna (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

An awesome update to an awesome story!
Can't wait to see where it's going and I honestly can't wait until Kagome makes an appearence again!


Rosalind (Chapter 76) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

Holy hannah that's what sesshomaru meant when in earlier chapters he said he was going to finish what he started?!

darn you for creating such beautiful wonderful chapters that are so gosh darned short and leave me desperate for more!


Inusbabe (Chapter 75) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

I am so glad I got back around to catch up on this... I haven't read anything in a few months... I was missing it... I waiting for more chapters!


GreyEcho (Chapter 75) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Ooo! >.< Can't wait for the next chapter. XD


loveyaa (Chapter 75) - Tue 12 Oct 2010

I quite like the way that you framed this chapter and had everything reveled. The cat is out of the bag now...but lets see what he's gonna do about it. This is clearly a major turning point and I can't wait to see the fallou and the yound and older Sesshoumaru's thoughts on what is happening/what happened. It would be fun to compare them but I look forward to your next bout of genius :)


bloodangelsess (Chapter 75) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

I love this fanfic and I'm a huge fan....BUT....COME ON!!!!! How are you going to end it like that....I've been waiting to read tooo. *sighs* I guess I'll just have to wait like everyone else


Lauren (Chapter 75) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

Well, that was... concise. But still very emotionally charged. I love how you can pack so many feelings in so few words and so little dialogue. *gives you cookies*

Is it just me, or do the chapter titles seem to be lagging? "Sat Among the Cinders" seemed more appropiate for the last section of chapter seventy-three and "Fly Away Home" the title for chapter seventy-four. "In For A Pound" did work for chapter seventy-three, but It think it may have been better for the first three sections of chapter seventy-three. ...Then again, you are working on a schedule and an one-hundred chapter deadline. I suppose you already have this all planned out, no?

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Margie (Chapter 75) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

eeeeee I can't wait for more!!!!!! xoxo


Darrakk (Chapter 75) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

Surely Sesshoumaru's word counts as well?

Oh and that was a very mean way to end the chapter. So mean that I postponed reviewing as punishment. Bad you.

Thank you very much for updating, can't wait for the next LONG chapter! I keep trying to convince myself to wait til there are at least a few updates so as to get a bigger dose of the goodness at once, but I just can't wait that long. Its toooo goood to wait for.


jojo661538 (Chapter 75) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

this might be the best story there ever was i cant get enough of it keep up the great work i hope you update soon again ^_^


Allie (Chapter 75) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

You are such a tease with these updates!!!

I'm dying for Kagome to get back to her time already and see the sparks fly.

Love love love this story!!!


Lady Hiroko (Chapter 75) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

I didn't sign in but I squealed like a fan-girl in disappointment due to the shortness of it. I know it's a drabble and it only exists so you can participate in a contest but it's so EPIC! I think I'll cry if you went back - after the contest - and added more detail to the chapters. Actually I think I'll fall out of my chair if you do it's so great. *whines* It's so HARD to find good fics such as this........ Kudos to you. I hope you win.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 75) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

wuh oh, looks like crap is about to hit the fan... i so can't wait until Kagome ends back up where she belongs, it's going to be interesting to say the least


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 75) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

@_@ oh! _ _ _♥


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 75) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

Ack, torture!  I hope there's a long chapter after this.  I also hope we get some insight on what's running through Kagome and Sesshoumaru's head while Hisoka is talking to Inutaisho.  So I guess that's the way Hisoka decided to drop the miko bomb, haha.  It's smart to open with "he saved your son's life." before letting a protective dog demon know that his son has been in close quarters with their natural enemy for several months, lol.  I love Hisoka.  He truely is one of my favorite OC's of all time.  I hope Kagome gets to share her side of the story.  Gah!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  You seriously need to do this for a living (writing I mean).  You are very, very talented.  Anyways, I hope you can update soon.  Please keep up the good work!


Tina (Chapter 75) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

I love this story! I cant wait to read more and see what happens when She gets back.


loveyaa (Chapter 74) - Wed 06 Oct 2010

I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved how u showed the sense of urgency and the feelings of everybody. I think this might be one of my favorite chapters. I am looking forward to the fallout and yet not at the same time. I am on the edge of my seat. I mean that she doesn't die but how does she get out of this one and will this be the event that changed Sesshoumaru's outlook. OMG...I just love how this set up so many things and thought processes and I just can't wait :)


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