Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

Page 48 of 106
<< Start < Prev 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 Next > End >>
laenfante (Chapter 77) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

I've known this moment was coming, and have been waiting for it breathlessly. As always, you made it a magical one. Thank you!


vicktickmarie (Chapter 77) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

It all makes sense now. Especially when you go back and read the earlier chapters. It is so good. I love it and my head is about to explode. I need to know what happens. I need to know what happens when Kagome comes back. I really want to see Sesshomaru's reaction. I hope he hugs her. Lol. Can't wait for more. 


nyjah (Chapter 77) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

Hey I normally don't review as much as I should, but I felt this chapter was great. Sesshomaru and the rote was something I did not expect nor saw coming and added much a spice to the story line. I look forward to your next chapter and keep up the good work.

-Nyjah


Eve (Chapter 77) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

OMG!  I LOVE iT!!!!!

More,more please please!  hahaha

This just keeps getting better and better!  LOVE this FIC of yours!!!!

Thank You!


kagomesirene (Chapter 77) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

 “You are betrothed.”

---------------------

XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

XD XD XD XD face splitting smile ... cannot *talk*  XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD


naqaashi (Chapter 77) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

I burst into uncontrollable triumphant laughter, began thumping the keyboard, bounced around in my chair, and generally had my roomie convinced I'd lost my mind - perhaps for good.

 

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I love you for this one, really....it's one of my favourites...especially Sessmom's reactions! ::wondering why the hell she didn't just zoom in and drag her son away from Kagome, with all the super speed and strength and assorted demon powers::


Stephanie (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
Poor Kags though! being reminded of Inu cause of Inu-papa, I think that's my favorite part of this chapter. There's so much hidden meaning!


Manatee (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

OMG!  What a great chapter.  You keep me on the edge of my seat and begging for more.  Thank you for the update, I'm sure I speak for us all when I say I eagerly await the next chapter..and the one after...and the one after that!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

The only reason I can find errors in your writing is because the writing is so perfect, each word like a jewel specially chosen for that spot, and no other will do. That is why any errors you make stand out like sore thumbs. And I am so OCD that I have to point them out so you can make the story perfect!

Then, the boy tugged clumsily at the collar of her kimono, and Kagome’s eyes [few] flew wide.

You really had me holding my breath through this chapter. I had to keep reminding myself that Sesshoumaru was trying to find his own solution to keeping Kagome safe. It is a REALLY good chapter and I can't (though I suppose I must) wait for the next chapter!


Kay (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

sqee~~!! I am loss at words. this scene is by far my favorite chapter of all!

How can I put this? It's adorable, sweet, funny/humorous, touching... just excellent. Excellent portrayal of character interaction.. just Wow.. i'm loss at words.

omg, how can this little sesshy do so much.... siigh* only if this really happened in the real manga.

But regardless, you make us (at least me) dream.... so realistic~ words cannot describe.

I'm jumbling... incoherent right now.

just wow. Bravo~~

please continue!! I mean, please update this weekend. CANT WAIT!!!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

oh my _ _ _ ♥


Fox (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

I think you should have been able to hear that scream from your house. Epic awesome chapter fdjsklgjfdhgsg FFFFF. IS IT NEXT FRIDAY YET?

/giggle

I had a suspicious that's what was going to happen... adorable, but I do want to throw something at them for not trusting Kagome- but who can blame them?


Little_Emmie (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

Genius! Just Genius! That's all I can say..


Sala (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

With her new mark, it should certainly make things interesting when Kagome returns to the "normal" time-line of the IY universe.  *grins*


Kayka (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

That was amazing! Now I'm satisfied to know how he "checked" to see if she were Higurashi earier... er... later! (I suspected last chapter)I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

Oi.  Well this makes things complicated, lol.  I really wonder what Inu No Taisho would have done if Sesshoumaru hadn't stepped in.  I don't think he would have killed her.  Probably would have banished her, but not killed her.  I like to think she's planting the seed of respect in his heart that will allow him to see humans a bit differently.  I guess we'll have to wait and see how things play out.  Excellent chapter.  I must say again how adorable Sesshoumaru is.  He's such a little man ^___^  Anyways, this was a very exciting chapter, can't wait for the next one.  You always leave us wanting more.  Keep up the good work! 


Acadia (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

OMG I love it! Can't wait for another one.


serasvictoria666 (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

absolutely wonderful! ^-^


Sabrina-star (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! Please dont make us waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaittt 1 whole week!!!! Pleaaaaaaaaseeee!!!! I could give you anything you want!!!! Seriously!!! One humongous box of cookies, the biggest, largest bag of treats you´ve EVER seen or even the biggest, most mouthwatering chocolate sundae with you choice in syrup and a cherry on top!!! ;) Think about it!!!! Seriously!


AdriAnna (Chapter 77) - Fri 22 Oct 2010

>.>  O.O

 

XDDD  Oh, Sesshomaru, you are destined for her, and I wonder how Inuyasha will react when he hears of it.


Page 48 of 106
<< Start < Prev 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.