Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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GreyEcho (Chapter 78) - Sun 31 Oct 2010

awww... BUt then she has to leave and and...>.<


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 78) - Sun 31 Oct 2010

WOW!!!! I loved that chapter it was awesome! I can't wait for the next installment I'm sure it is going to be just as great as the others you've written so far keep up the great work!


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 78) - Sun 31 Oct 2010

Ohhhh, I soooo love Sesshoumaru. He is sooo adorable! I cannot wait for the next update. Please hurry.


sunset in love (Chapter 78) - Sat 30 Oct 2010

so, that's the real reason.... i wonder what will happen next!


L-desu (Chapter 78) - Sat 30 Oct 2010

oh i do so love this reinterpretation of the original scene in the skeleton.  this is becoming so much more complicated, and i can't see what next you unfold.  cheers to you!


Kara (Chapter 78) - Sat 30 Oct 2010

That was soooo cute! So very cute! Awwwww... I have no idea what to say accept that so... yeah.


soul (Chapter 78) - Sat 30 Oct 2010

That was so touching.  He both protects and needs protecting.  It was so sweet, innocent, and heart breaking at the same time.  I loved it!


definitefan (Chapter 78) - Sat 30 Oct 2010

Your ability to create so much meaning in so few words is such an amazing talent. Whether the chapter ends up short or long, I feel as though I walk away from each update satisfied yet yearning to learn what happens next. I think I've read all your stories here at dokuga, but this one is definitely my favorite, especially this chapter. The last scene honestly left me a little misty-eyed at its innocence. You are a truly talented individual and I hope you will continue to grace us with your creativity.


shelltastica (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Oct 2010

This story always cheers me up even when it's serious, you're amazing =].  Just thought I'd leave a lil something to show my appreciation for how much work you put into this. You never fail to make me smiley inside and out, =3 Thanxies!


Terry Lynn (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

The nightmare/flashback was bomb diggity!


SmilingFool (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

You know even though this is a drabble, I love it....  You have written this very well and it is funny at times especially when you write about the others in the near future....  Totally cool two thumbs up....  I just can't wait till you write Kagome's disappearance and her return to the gang.....  Kami I can't wait the antisipation is killing me.  Please continue to do your best, until next time.  Peace


Addy (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

:D  Yes!  Now, Kagome is betrothed!  :333


loveyaa (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

This was a sweet chapter. I really liked how they got close while still being innocent about it. Again your writing was superb. there was only one little thing that I saw but it was vastly overshadowed by how you brought the emotions in the scene to life. I esp can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru, the older one, is going to react now when he is once again reuinted with his Higurashi. Im so torn between wanting to see the younger Sesshoumaru grow closer and yet knowing that this won't last and seeing it maybe fixed in the not quite so future future. I am on the edge my seat ready to go with a box of tissue and a smile. Til next time :)


Banana (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

oh my god

this whole story has been one huge tease. *huffs*

 

I loved this of course lol cute, warm and left me wanting more.

 

*huffs again* I'm not even sure what to do with myself now that there's no more to read.

 

...I'm tempted to start at chapter 1 haha

 

thank you once again for this lovely story!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

Oh, Forthy, you do so delight my heart! The growing closeness between the two of them is so sweet, made even sweeter by the knowledge that it is soon to be severed. I have such affection for Sesshoumaru-sama, Kagome and Hisoka, it's like they are real people! Thank you.


kitsuneonna (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

I never review! But I have to make an exception in this case, because Unspoiled updates are typically the highlight of my reading for the week, and I wanted to let you know. You infuse so much scenery, depth of meaning, and emotion into these short chapters that the story is a treat to re-read several times over.

Also, Sesshoumaru is a very sweet boy in your story, you also make absolutely certain that he is undoubtedly Sesshoumaru and not unrecognizably saccharine. Really, all the characters are well done--especially the original ones, where sometimes writers go a little off-kilter on. I love this story. thank you for writing it.


Margie (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

So cute!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for more! xoxo


Acadia (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

OMG! OMG! OMG! I love it!


Hesunohana (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

oh ! I will say it in french because it's more easy for me : "trop choupiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (just too cute) (giggles) Kagome is twisting the oath because she knows she will not be here forever. but Sesshou-kun doesn't know. he is so sweet like that, he was so afraid for her and he really wish to keep her.

 

I wonder when Kagome will meet the "Sesshoumaru adult" ? when that time comes, it will be so... I haven't enough words to describe what I feel.

 

so, see you next time !


Terri-tots (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

“Milord tries very hard.”

That made me giggle-snort.

I am also highly amused that she is so hung up on the fact he bit her. Of all the possible-- painful outcomes that her situation presented I think she got off rather easy. Getting nibbled on by a tiny ball of cuteness and fluff (even if it is a haughty one) rates higher on my list than being eviscerated by the current Lord of the West (and his posse of noble men and women-- and his mate who is glaring daggers at her now.)

However, the reaction is totally Kagome.

Poor Hisoka. Those kids run him ragged.

Loved the chapter Forthy. 


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