Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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JessB (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

You just made me CRY!  And I NEVER cry?!!!  Well done!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

@_@ WHAT?!?!?!?! NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU *cries* she can't go back?! But what about Miroku and Sango and Kaede and Inuyasha?! ZOMG I think ima cry for her! Poor Kags :'( Dangit Forthy! *shakes fist at you*


katlady (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

OMG I LOVE YOU FORTH!!!!

thats  all I cna   say yep pure  Kat Love

 

;purs with happiness  over newest chapter:

 


Kayka (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

Aaaaaaah! I mean... nope, aaah pretty much summed it up. :0

I'm super excited for the next part!


KEdakumi (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

Awww.... that wouldn't be a good way to start the morning.  Now what's she gonna do?  Besides cry some more, I mean.  I can't wait to find out.


Tiegrsi (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

omg omg omg! I totally thought that's where you would go, but it still threw me for a loop! Ahhhh! Where are Inuyasha and Sesshomaru? After 500 years I would think they would also want to be there to see Kagome. :( I hope they are only giving her time to adjust or something! Oh, I don't know if I can wait for your next update! Sorry, I seem to be using a lot of exclaimation points...

Kagome will never see Sango and Miroku for a final goodbye? Or Kaede? That's sad...but I suppose someone will tell her about their lives, and of Rin's life (I hope!).

 

I <3 Unspoiled!!!


AmoraLynn (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

Oh poor Kagome, she must be heartbroken. I can only imagine how things went with InuYasha and Sesshoumaru. 


soulNchantress (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

Awww.  Poor Songo and Miroku.  Maybe even Inuyasha (he's not a bad guy in your story, so I will miss him, too.)  What happens next?


Firehauke (Chapter 91) - Fri 04 Mar 2011

There's a bittersweet sadness about this chapter.  So many twists and turns to this story.  One of the best I've ever read!


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 Mar 2011

Tiegrsi (Chapter 90) - Tue 01 Mar 2011

Wow. Just...wow. This story is so awesome, I am loving it! I just began reading it last night and was unable to stop until I got to the last chapter that's been posted. I have to seriously commend you for youe skills as a writer. I absolutely LOVE the little details you added into things - like Sesshou always making his own path instead of walking down a road kind of stuff. It's obvious you really thought hard about each character and how they would think/react.

Hisoka is an AMAZING addition to the story! He is so very like Miroku, yet, not like him at all! I love how you put in that Ah-Un was odd and that he was supposed to have been 'put down'. Sesshomaru apparently started collecting an odd assortment when he was VERY young! A cat for a teacher, a two headed dragon for a pet, a human 'exception', then later a kappa retainer and a human ward. :) You ideas explained a lot.

I love that Inuyasha is not a complete idiot in your story. Despite my oft dubious portrayal of him in my stories, Inuyasha is actually my second favorite character, even over Kagome in some instances. So It's nice to see him in a better light.

Well, I don't want to make this too terribly long, so I will end it here. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! I look forward to seeing it through till the end!


Seshiepersonalpriestess (Chapter 90) - Mon 28 Feb 2011

Just wanted you to know that I have not stopped reading this wonderful story. I love it!!!!


zackire (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

kagome u big time coward!! go back to sessho n kiss him already!! lol


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

zomg poor sesshy :( 


Hesunohana (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

oh oh ! "problèmes en vue" as we say in french. poor Hisoka-sensei ! (laugh)

 

I wonder what are thinking Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru ? we know what Kagome thinks, but the other two, I wonder.

 

well, next time "girls talk" with Momma and a piece of advice from the futur Hisoka-sensei.


Margie (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

Here kitty kitty kitty! I can't wait for more !!!! :))))


Ashes (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

Poor Hisoka-sensei!!!! Understanding what Kagome is going through I can't blame her. But, really?! She had to throw him to the dogs?! I want to give that poor cat a hug and a little bit of a break. At the very least I can take comfort in knowing he doesn't die.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Happy writing!


Autumn (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

Uh oh, Hisoka is in trouble and poor Sesshomaru, she left him again.


Christie (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

Ah, poor Sesshomaru, left behind again.

Time is not kind to him.

Yet, he's left with an unending amount of it, to come to terms, grow and evolve. Poor Kagome is left thrown into it, with no time to evolve and no chance to come to grips with what was to come.

A complete delight, again.


pclark (Chapter 90) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

Aww, poor Hisoka-sensei.  He really needs to have more than 9 lives, we won't know until it happens whether or not you put Sess-mom's reaction for Kagome being with Sesse again.  She of course will take it out on Hisoka-sensei.

Are there going to be more time jump problems?  Anyways hope you update soon. :)


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