Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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WildcatYST (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

Yay! Fantastic chapter! I've definitely been waiting for Kagome to ask that question. :) 


Luna (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

You know... I liked this chapter all the way up until the very last sentence. She owed him? That makes it sound like she doesnt really want to be with him and is only giving him a chance out of guilt. As much as I love this story... I really dont like the Kagome in it. She just seems like she has such a weak character, and that's just a little off putting. Especially the fact that Sesshoumaru waited five centuries for her and she's only giving him a chance because she feels as if she owes him. I love Hisoka, he's definitely my favorite character (and those sly sentences you sometimes added made a person feel as if he has feelings for her too, beyond simple friendship.) And Sesshoumaru is such a sweetheart... in a Sesshoumaru kind of way. I hope you do something to make me like Kagome, or pretty soon I think I'm gonna start rooting for Hisoka ;p


Karen (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

You're probably tired of hearing this.  But this is a really good story!  It's one that you can just read over and over, and it's not finished yet.  Awesome job.  This story makes Friday even better.


Paige (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

Yes! There is a god! Thank you so much Forthright. That was perfect.

I'm so happy now. She is finally going to give Sesshomaru a chance. I was really feeling for the poor guy for a while - He was so nervous. :(

But it's all good now. Kagome is going to be a good girl and make us happy. Let us pray that the coutship goes well.

Look forward to next Friday! :D


soulNchantress (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

Awwwww!  I reached the end of the chapter too quickly.  I'd best reread it, but at a slower pace this time through.  A week is a heck of a long time to wait for the next.  I shall savor it.


Rin (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

Awwww. That's so cute. Kagome finally plans to give hime a proper chance. <3

 

I'm curious and excited to see what happened to Inuyasha too now.


TKE (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

I hope they finally get together after everything thats happened!


Riku Ryuu (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

I love your story and I am so happy you updated again! I know that it hasn't been that long, but it felt like years waiting for the next chapter. Thank you so much for all your hard work.


naqaashi (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

She owes him five chances and a half, I'd say...and I'm glad she's finally woken up to how much she must have hurt him. Poor Sess; my heart's really going out to him in this one. Especially when Kagome realises she may have a lot to make up for...and that the poor puppy doesn't even dare hug her anymore. 

 

On a side node: Skye, MomoDesu, summer and I were in chat and pretty worried earlier, about you west coast people. It's good to know you're fine...we saw your updates and assumed that if you were updating, you must be okay!


Nilee1 (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

yeah!!!!!!!


naqaashi (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

She owes him five chances and a half, I'd say...and I'm glad she's finally woken up to how much she must have hurt him. Poor Sess; my heart's really going out to him in this one. Especially when Kagome realises she may have a lot to make up for...and that the poor puppy doesn't even dare hug her anymore. 

 

On a side node: Skye, MomoDesu, summer and I were in chat and pretty worried earlier, about you west coast people. It's good to know you're fine...we saw your updates and assumed that if you were updating, you must be okay!


Tealeavz (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

This was absolutely beautiful, and the emotion in this chapter left me with this delightful pain in my chest. It's taken us quite a while to get here, but the journey has been so wonderful I never want it to end. And somehow you always manage to leave me itching anxiously in joy for more. Can't wait to read next week's chapter.


cyin (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

aww =d
really loved this chapter. keep up the great work! 


nyaaaa (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS HELL YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS* runs and jumps off a roof* YESSSSSSSSS! *splat* so ooo worth it! i have been waiting since yesterday for this chaper your the best writer ever!!!!


Lauren (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

How did I know the sweater would be part of the gifts? Nice tie in to the rest of the story. The past to the present.

I think she owes him so much more than just a chance, but maybe that's because I'm not so forgiving of those that would forsake their friends for their own comfort.

This was a good chapter though. I see that you're making time jumps and while I understand them, I also hope things are not resolved too quickly. I expect that we don't have too many chapters left, but it's the end that's usually the most difficult part, no?

Well... I'm conflicted. I'm not angry (because this really was a good chapter), but neither am I happy (circumstances within and surrounding the chapter). I just hope that they can try to make things better. Work on it and try to mature as they hadn't through their other experiences. ...Maybe that's what's the most disappointing. The fact that even though they've been through so much, they've matured so little.

Looking forward to seeing *cough* and Inuyasha.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Anonymous (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

Fox (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

FFFFFFFFFFFff. SO MUCH SQUEEING OVER HEREYOUJUSTHAVENOIDEAISWEARWEGGGG.

Is it Friday yet?

 

._.


lauren (Chapter 92) - Fri 11 Mar 2011

Ah! This is still probably one of, if not my favorite stories out there. So sweet! This is why I look forward to Fridays XD Can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction (and how he's changed!)


xXx Juu Dai Sama xXx (Chapter 91) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

Oh Forthy you have no idea how happy you make me whenever you post your chapters for this amazing story. You make me wish everything that has happened in it canon. <3 

 

I look very much forward to the next installment. -Twitches her nose and makes it rain of Forthy's favorite flowers.-


Kara (Chapter 91) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

I feel bad that she won't ever return... does she choose that or is it forced because of the well being stubborn? I do wonder very much... I can't wait until the next chapter!


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