Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Ashes (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

After 10 hours of driving and unpacking and packing to unpack and drive another 10 hours this is a great reprieve. 

I love the flow of your plot, the characters, and I'm totally in love with the idea of Hisoka snensei taking over the world! 


WildcatYST (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

Thanks for an update! I loved this chapter! So sweet and gentle. And congrats on all of the awards you've won for this! Well deserved!


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

omg i love and hate the "scenic" route at the same time.... thanks for updating...ishall await the next!


Paige (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

YES! This is AMAZING... again.

I am so excited for the next chapter - though I still do not know what Sesshomaru is exactly planning.

I cannot wait to find out! :D


Sala - nli (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

It is no surprise that Hisoka-sensei was voted Best Original Character of 2010.  He is, without a doubt, one of the best OCs I have ever come across.  In any fandom.


Manatee (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

Beautiful as always, thank you for the update.

-Mana


Jo (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

Awwww... I love the snuggling scene at the end of it and the fact that Hisoka just went and conquered the world -- in a friendly, well-meaning kind of way.

It's a very good chapter - full of explainations, re-establishing bonds, understandings, and so much tentative love and affection. Well done!


Fox (Chapter 94) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

YAAAAAAAAY SENSEI! *throws confetti* Congrats on your big win!

And I loooved this chapter. <3 So much sweet, so much fluff!


Kara (Chapter 94) - Fri 25 Mar 2011

Of course he was declared Best Original Character- a very dynamic character full of twists and turns. He also isn't an obvious self-insertion under another name. I love Hisoka-sensei as much as most of your other readers do! I always look forward to your updates you are a very talented writer.


TKE (Chapter 94) - Fri 25 Mar 2011

Congrats on Hisoka.....awesome story!!!! Can't wait until next week!


Tiegrsi (Chapter 94) - Fri 25 Mar 2011

Great update! And congrats on your win for Best Original Character!


Rin (Chapter 94) - Fri 25 Mar 2011

She seems to finally be warming up to her situation nicely.

Reality can seem so very surreal at times.

You gave a very nice blend of tender, funny, and serious moments in this chapter. <3


renee mannings (Chapter 94) - Fri 25 Mar 2011

OMG. Why are you so talented? It should be imposible. I love grown yp Sesshoumaru. A lot. 


renee mannings (Chapter 94) - Fri 25 Mar 2011

OMG. Why are you so talented? It should be imposible. I love grown yp Sesshoumaru. A lot. 


YuiitsuSakka (Chapter 93) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Ok... I have come to the conclusion that I will keep this story up continuously, refreshing the page every half-hour or so, until the next chapter is up...

 

Jk, lol! ...Maybe. O.O

This story is really one of the best I've come across since "Tales from the House of the Moon". I love the concept. 

Can't wait until the next update!


pclark (Chapter 93) - Sun 20 Mar 2011

Yay!  Another chapter, I am happy.  Anyways yeah, is Sesse sad in this chapter cause I get this vibe from the feel of this chapter that he is depressed slightly.


Hesunohana (Chapter 93) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

so SWEET !!! Oh, I love them !

 

short but cute this time. bravo !

 

see you next !


Loveyaa (Chapter 93) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

and they are getting back into their groove. I wonder how things will progress between them though and when inuyasha will make his apperance since he apperantly stops by often. I thought the title of this chapter was quite clever and I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what events will transpire next :)


Paige (Chapter 93) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

Yes! That was AWESOME! Thank you for updating.

It was perfect really - Sesshomaru's thinking was so adorable! I just wanted to hug him for the way "he was lost in thought, envisioning a long and fruitful courtship," and when he called her his "betrothed" and wished for her to stay with him.

I was a little lost though with the, "He’d tuned out most of the well-meaning advice he’d been subjected to over the years, and many of the plans that had sounded workable in theory seemed foolish now. In the end, everything it was quite simple. Affection may have brought her back, but only attraction will keep her here." Because then he continues to add, "There was no denying his own attraction, but it was too soon to tell if an advance would be welcomed. Scaring her off again was not an option."

Was Sesshomaru planning to seduce Kagome with his sexual prowess? If so, I'm definately rooting for the guy. Though he is reconsidering it, I think that would be really fun and sexy to read! Hehe.

But it's just a thought. Cannot wait to see if I am right!


WildcatYST (Chapter 93) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

This chapter was absolutely worth the wait. Your characterization of Kagome and Sesshoumaru is spot on for me! I really can't wait to see where this story goes. Thanks for the update!


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