I am not even halfway through and your work has me gripping my seat in anticipation....
You write wonderfully and the events are perfectly timed too. The characters are not over the top.
I wish though you would introduce another male solely for kagome's virginity at least. Else the plots swings completely in Sesshomaru's favour. But it is of course only a suggestion... I would not presume to dictate to the author....
I am only at chapter 5, lets see, how things go first....:)
Caera (Chapter 53) - Sun 27 Oct 2013
The last 3 chapters are amazing...glad the story is progressing and at least they have a time to breath and enjoy family.
Eliona (Chapter 53) - Sun 27 Oct 2013
More babies please? :3 haha.
This chapter was sweet and cute, keep it coming.
haha so much fluff. looks like all is good
its ok to bleed to death when you are immortal. :D
Shaneka (Chapter 52) - Thu 24 Oct 2013
Yay the baby is here, now the bitch must die!!!
Alii (Chapter 51) - Tue 22 Oct 2013
Aww hell she better get ready for ymthe worst pain ever! Please update soon!
That's great, baby on the way. Keep it coming.
Eliona (Chapter 51) - Sat 19 Oct 2013
OH! THE CLIFFIES!! D: great chapters!
Denise (Chapter 51) - Sat 19 Oct 2013
Duhm Duhm Duhm....the baby is coming. I hope the birth goes well and nothing bad happens to her or the baby. I have a feeling that his mom is going to want to kill the baby. LEts hope it won't be that bad...fingers corssed.
Great update. keep up the good work :)
Shaneka (Chapter 51) - Sat 19 Oct 2013
Great chapter can't wait to meet the new addition to the family, update soon.
uh oh. are their kids going to deliver? o.O
Alii (Chapter 50) - Tue 15 Oct 2013
I finally caught on!! Woo hoo!(: I am dying to know what the baby will be please update soon!
Phyllis (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Oct 2013
I see Sesshomaru has some pretty innovative "techniques" in trying to get Kagome to talk. Very nice chapter. He won't be able to deny his desire of her for very long from the looks of it! I will try to read more soon. You can see how behind I am!
Shaneka (Chapter 50) - Tue 15 Oct 2013
Yay I absolutely loved this chapter, waiting anxiously for the next chapter update.
The chapter was not rush, it was nice. Keep it coming.
Denise (Chapter 50) - Mon 14 Oct 2013
It was a bit fast, but I liked it. I felt like you got to the point. I am happy that everything is turning out great so far...I have a feeling his mom is not going to stay out of his life for long. The baby is going to be loved by everyone :) Great update
Haven (Chapter 50) - Mon 14 Oct 2013
Baby steps are still progress. Thanks for writing!
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