What is the time period that this part of the story is in now and what are the ages of the children? Nice chapter!

I have enjoyed every chapter of this fic, it is so dramatic and keeps me at the edge of my seat. The last two chapters were really great and showed that their journey was far from over. Aaah! I feel so sorry for them. But I can relate nothing good in life comes without sacrifice. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter.

The notation at the beginning of the chapter about the time line cleared up a few things. I knew the story was a flash back but I often wondered about that six months time reference and was a bit puzzled by it. Anyhow it make better sense now that it has been corrected.

Great chapter, i truly feel sorry for what they have in store for her.

I love this story it is fascinating, I love the drama and the angst in it as well. The characters are defined but not over the top. I feel their pain and struggles, and it is believable that Sesshomaru would befriend Kagome after finding out that his kind never lived to see the future, he is proud and would do whatever he could to change that fate and ultimately fall for her when he got a chance to know her. I like that the story is not rushed and that you took the time to develop the original characters personalities, Although Sessh mom is such an evil bitch. The plot is one of the most originals I have read in a long time. Their aren't many stories out there with Sess trying to change history and to secure his race's survival. I for one have not read any up to date and I have read a lot of fanfiction in this genre.

I can tell that after speaking with Bokuseno that Kagome and Sesshomaru are going to have it rough. I can only hope that she doesn't give up. The ryu is just as terrible as lady Harumi if not worse, I hope they both die a terrible death. I feel a little bad for Seira, she is the product of her mother's evil and vindictive ways, maybe you could consider saving her let her make ammends and go over on the side of good, its only a suggestion. lol! This chapter was really meaningful, Sesshomaru witnessed hatred from humans towards him and Kagome's relationship, and Kagome was able to see it not only from a human stand point but from his view as well. Your writing and your story is great. I look forward each time with anticipation for an update from you.

Always and forever love this story and the updates. The story so far has been more than excellent, keep it coming.

I am enjoying the pace of your story.  It seems as though shizz is about to happen.  The dragon lord is super creepy, as is Sess mom - she is just supremely evil - and I dread to find out what she has planned for her 'daughter' who I am starting to feel sorry for.  Keep up the great writing!

You want reviews dear writer? Well get ready to listen as I have alot to say. First, you have absolutely no need to be concerned if this fic is good. It's not good...it's great! fantastic, reveting, and exciting. I have enjoyed every thing from the start and even though I cannot always read, when I do come to read I am totally enraptured with each chapter.

I love Kagome's little girl! Yuki sounds like a pure miracle that is going to be the catalist of bringing youkai and humans together in peace. I love how you have made her so unique in that she changes from youkai to hanyou and has both her parents powers in her. Of course Mama started teaching her as soon as possible how to control her reiki and Dad plus siblings were teaching her about being youkai. I love how she looks when she changes. So cute either way and I'm sure she knows it. I could see her carrying that big Panda to go on the adventure with them. Oh and feeding Daddy cake. I can image her little grin, little fangs peering out. (Kagome's poor breasts)

 I love how deeply Sesshoumaru loves Kagome that he not only feeds her his blood to keep her alive and healthy, he watches over her listening to her words with love and understanding when she feared he would see her as weak when she was pregnant and sick and through the loss of their first child. He never berated her for her feelings and said he loved her because of her feelings, that Kagome without emotions saddens him as that is a part of her being human, the human he fell in love with. He loves her enough to abstain from sex because of her fears of having another child in such trying times. I loved how he gently made love to her even though she was afraid of getting pregnant and telling her he'd be quick even though he knew he couldn't. (but you made one error, dear one, you said he would prevent his essence from entering her in hope of alleaving her fears, but sperm is in the fluid that leaks from the male's penis to help lubricate the female vagina during sex. Unless he has the ability to deaden his sperm she can get pregnant even if he pulls out before ejaculation. No insult meant. But you know younger girls read these fics and they need accurate truth in this area. My own husband tried to tell me this when we were young but I had a very informative mother and I laughed at him as he was the one who had the experience! LOL)

Now on to Lady Harumi and Seira and the Ryuu. I agree with the others, the Lady deserves a painful, unforgettable death...by her son or Kagome. At this point, I wouldn't be too disappointed if Seira killed her slowly and painfully. Seira, though she hurt both Sesshoumaru and Kagome and allowed the use of one of Sesshoumaru's children to the point of the child's pending death, I feel just a small bit of sorrow for her as Lady Harumi used her to mate the Ryuu and he treats her so roughly because he's angry with Harumi and feels he's getting revenge by hurting her. She lost all her offspring from him and it seems as if it honestly hurt her to lose them, even though they were part Ryuu. I'm anxious to know exactly what he did to Seira. I have an idea but I know I have to wait. The Ryuu neds to go, really. He's trouble and though Harumi thinks she can control him, she's got another thing coming because this youkai knows she just messing with him and he will never get a hold of the Western Lands as long as she is alive. I also anxiously await her demise and his. Can Seira be changed for the good? Hm, I wonder...

Oh, and I can't forget Shippou coming back. It wouldn't have been right if Kagome didn't have him in her life somewhere. I'm glad you made him an important character too. He's always been so frightened of Sesshoumaru and now he's right their working with Sesshoumaru to make their quest a success.

There's so much adventure, drama, love and family in this. You are doing such a wonderful job and I'd like you to remember that, ok?  JEN

Yay! Another chapter.!

please keep them coming.  Can hardly wait!

I didn't see that coming...she is pregnant. That is going to be very difficult now. She won't be able to fight and protect her family, Lets hope nothing big happens while she is pregnant. Is Inuyasha going to help his brother?? Great update

I love this story. Its not slow or fast. Very good pace. :)

I wonder if the potion is going to kill his egg. I feel bad for her. Everyone keeps using her. Lets hope she some how survies. Great updat :D

uh oh. at this rate, in 1000 years time they will have a country for themselves.

I love this story so much, but please don't turn Kagome into a demon. Please!

sesshomaru  regain his throne at  death traitors  horrible 

Great chapter waiting to see what happens next.

Uh,oh! Bad guy is sowing bad seed...

I kinda feel bad for the couple  lossing so many babies. MAybe there baby was not suppose mix between both races or someone is killing the babies???? Well Im exited that the happy couple are going to go on an adventure. It will be abit dangerous for the whole family. Lets hope they stay together and watch each others back. :) Great update.

Happy holidays :D

That baby is going to be powerful. People will probably not recognize her because of her powers. Great update :)