The battle scenes were very! very very! good. You did great and i was immersed in it all. But i can't help to wonder what that lady harumi is up to. It was very smart of Sesshomaru to bring the tiger along with his ice powers to counter the dragons fires and heat. Well done!

I think you did an excellent job in writing the battle scenes. It left me breathless. I'm excited to see what the next chapter will bring. Update soon I hope. Great job!

Ohhhhhhh! Almost there!

Five stars :-D

Five stars ?????:-D ????

Whew! That was hard to read, Kagome girl I feel your pain, I only hope that everything turns out alright. I wish Sesshomaru had acted on his feelings and gone to check up on Yuki, if only the general hadn't stopped him. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

This chapter made me sad, but it is relatable children can oftentimes bring their parents a lot of hurt and grief. Poor Kags having to decide whether to stay with the remaining children or going after her daughter. That was very hard but I think she made the right decision, if there is one. Yuki is brave and smart, I only hope Sessh finds out soon of her plans and sends her home. I believe if he doesn't she maybe the issue that comes between them if she is hurt or she dies. Great update, the pace and timing of the events are perfect

Intense! I feel Kagome's hurt, and Sessh what can I say, he is hurting his mate with his words and then to top it off he goes and drop that revelation on her like a bomb. I am glad that kids are there for her, and also that Akiyoshi got all that off his chest and is ok.

Just catching up reading multiple chapters after a very hectic holiday season. Wow! That's all i can say, the story and plot line is incredible. Sessh thought that he could put fate on hold but it seems that fate will not be denied. Here he was planning his attack on the west in another two years, and now all that is forfeited by the attack on his son. I am wondering just like he is what he will do to hurt Kagome and drive them apart. Great chapter my friend!

Great chapter as usual. If only Sesshomaru could have gone and saved Yuki from making a terrible mistake by following him into battle. I can only hope she survive the war. I feel bad for Kagome, I really do!

Absolutely lovely chapter dear! You are a wonderful writer and the story is amazing.

First let me say this...Your story is wonderfully exciting. I started reading it two days ago and i couldn't stop. Your story is so unique, none like it is out there and you are doing a great job in writing it. I am very observant and i realized that you are not a seasoned writer like some here on Dokuga, so i checked your profile. It is really amazing that Bent is the second story that you wrote, what you lack in polished writings, in my opinion you definately make up for it in creativity and excitement. Your fic is very entertaining.

Keep going, i know talent when i see it, and you have it in abundance. Don't let the lack of reviews get you down. You have a good story going, let that be your motivation, and to hell with everyone else who do not want to give you a little encouragement by reviewing. My dear you can only get better if you persevere. I am looking forward to the next chapters anxiously...Well done!!

Ttttt, kids, what  is Kagome going to do???? First Akiyoshi and now Yuki. Kags must be besides herself with worry now more than ever because Sessh accused her of not being vigilant enough. Loving the story keep them coming.

I'm glad that Kagome stood up for herself. Sessh has a point but he is worried about the upcoming battle and the predictions and is taking it out on her. And how could he just drop all that baggage on her like that knowing how worried she is about the future. I hope he gets back his kingdom although in all likelywood Kags will be hurt. Great chapter!

Oh no! Poor Kagome, she definitely need a break. What is going to happen to Yuki. I hope Kagome think things through carefully before she does anything.

Wow! Great chapter I felt every emotion between the couple, although I thought Sessh was a tad too harsh. I believe he was worried about the prophesy and was striking out at Kagome. I am glad that Akiyoshi made it.

Omg what a chapter. My heart goes out for kagome! 

Awwwwww please don't end this....I beg you.... sobs

Ok that was a little emotional, hope everything turn out better.

question sesshomaru killed the 3 sons of riura