Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Ashes (Chapter 96) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

Wow! Just Wow! I did not see that one comming. Way to go Rin. *laughs* 

I especially love the quote "He brought her orphans like she used to bring him flowers"; totally made my day.


kathryn (Chapter 96) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

great  story can't wait for next chapter


CandyEars (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

ARG! I can't believe he married Rin!! OK, didn't see that one coming...  Poor Kagone seems to always get her hard decisions made for her by her circumstances.  At least it "frees" up her decision a little more I guess.  At least the brothers do get along as "future" Sess said.  LOVE THIS STORY!!! Just thought I'd throw that out there :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

[21:57:09] the X button my nemesis: FORTHY!! OMG!! so cute!

[21:57:17] the X button my nemesis: *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees at you* !!!!!

_ _ _ ♥


Zeika (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

Love it! Thanks for the update. 


sailor make-up (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

Sammi-Chan (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

OMGGGGG rin with inuyasha?????? i was like 8O that is crazy...well u got me hoooked again....dang you....


Marissa (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

Ok So I kept hearing and seeing fanart about this story. I never was interested because it seemed strange that Kagome could fall in love with a kid Sesshoumaru and then I prefer M rated stories because they are just more intense. But for some reason I happened to see it and just said what the heck why not? And I must say this is one of the best stories I have ever read!! so Go you and please update soon!!


>.< (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

*deep breath*

*sigh*

never mind.


MimiR (Chapter 96) - Thu 14 Apr 2011

I KNEW it!!! Way to go Rin!

 

Lovely chapter, and I love how Inuyasha has grown to resemble his father so much. I can just picture him all grown up. The idea of Totasai mixing them up cracks me up-reminds me of my mom.  :)


Rowdys girl (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

Perfect.


lauren (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

That was unexpected :P I don't know how I feel about that pairing, haha.


Jessica (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

I really can't say how much I love this story and the way it's written.  There are moments that bring me back to my own childhood and that of my own kids.  Thank you for such a wonderful treasure. 


cakeiton (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

i LOVE the pairing.


AmoraLynn (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

Oh thats fantastic! I can't wait for the next update. 


kay (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

gasp* I kinda knew this would happen... NOt particularly Rin, but that somehow you had to get rid of Inuyasha for Sess and Kags to work....

I am elated that our Sesshy has more chance but I wish it would be a competition for the two...

It's ok. I would like to see what your do with these characters. It will be wonderful and sweet regardless.


Jo (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

Oooooohohh!! *squeals* That's so sweet!

 

I love the way that in your stories these fellows finally have a chance to grow! They aren't stuck in their early twenties, but have filled out into their prime. Yay!

Poor Kagome. Her life never was normal - but then everything shifted and she barely had a chance to get comfortable with Sessh's childhood and now she has to adjust to everyone being grown up.

*tilts head* I wonder. Will Sesshoumaru allow her to grow as well before mating her? While eternal youth is always nice, I wouldn't want to be stuck in my 19-year-old body. *blinx* Wait. Maybe. Eh, it's all about mental growth right?

 

Inuyasha is old enough to share. My goodness, Kag has a lot to adjust to!


Alice (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

I knew Inuyasha was going to end up with Rin. :')

 

Lovely chapter. :)


soulNchantress (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

Forthright, this chapter was so fun...and unexpected.  I was resigned to wait 'til Friday!  YaY!

I had wondered what happened to Katashi.  I like him.  I'm so happy to know that he is still around.  I'm just wondering if we will see Kilala again.?.

Thank you, thank you, thank you, for the update!


Loveyaa (Chapter 96) - Wed 13 Apr 2011

Aww...I really enjoyed this entire chapter but my favorite part was at the end with Inuyasha's confession. That was just adorable on so many levels. I like that they still have their connection but that it does have subtle changes since both have changed. I think the way you get people to interact and tell their stories is just magnificant. I can't wait for more story telling and maybe story creating :)


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