Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Zeika (Chapter 99) - Tue 10 May 2011

Wonderful chapter, thanks for the update! 

 


Madeline (Chapter 99) - Mon 09 May 2011

That last chapter was utterly adorable!!! Sesshy and Kagome sitting in a tree...... :D Absolutely perfect chapter! Love this story!! Please keep up the amazing work!!!! :D Update when you can!!!


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 99) - Sun 08 May 2011

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH im so sad and happy and i feel like shippo jumping with giddyness!!!!!!!!! one more chapter nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this story is tooooo epic to end!!!!!! i will ball i know the ending has to be spectacular!!!!!!! *blush* that romance was soooo.....ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!! *squee* i snickered a few times as welll!!!!!!! i love this story i love this pairing i love you forthy!!!!! thank you thank you thank you for writting this amazingly EPIC story. i dread as well as eagerly await for next friday!!!!

 

much hugs and *squees* to you- sammi-chan!


Loveyaa (Chapter 99) - Sun 08 May 2011

And finally!! Wow...Nothing like going through this twice but having it mean something equally as important but totally different both times. I esp wonder what will happen now. I mean Kagome will have to return home soon, right? Will Sesshoumaru follow her there. Hisoka will to tutor her. I wonder what her family will say?! Everyone else will be estatic. I wonder how things will be different now that he has officially laid his claim. I can't wait to see how things end up from here :)


Selenay (Chapter 99) - Sun 08 May 2011

Ahhh! I want to scream! It is good!~ It is so very very good!

 

 


tearsofacrescent (Chapter 99) - Sun 08 May 2011

Holy cracker jacks man! I just... Wow, I think my heart stopped or my breath or something. Yup, something definitely stopped because that was just so amazing and sweet and freaking awesome!!!! If everyone wouldn't have been asleep, I swear I would have screamed.


Hikari (Chapter 99) - Sun 08 May 2011

omg!!! :D Let me tell you. I am sitting here with an extremely sore throat and a fever. I am barely able to talk. But when I read those last few lines I squealed with such force that I cried from the pain it caused XD

But omg yay!! I love your stories! They bring me such joy :D


Kamiki (Chapter 99) - Sun 08 May 2011

My reaction to the end of this chapter: AwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwWWWW!!!!

I loved it! :)


YuiitsuSakka (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

This chapter was absolutely FANTASTIC!


Ashes (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

I'm so happy right now! So very very happy!


Kassidee (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

another wonderful chapter! i can't wait for more! ;D


Purr-the-inu (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaa....aaa....aaa...aay

*gasp gasp gasp*

very good chapter forth-sama (L)


WildcatYST (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

Beautiful chapter. I can't believe it's almost over. I'm really looking forward to how you'll end this story. I'm really sad to see it end, but I have no doubt you'll be able to do a wonderful job with the last chapter. 


Rowdys girl (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

You know how you just feel blah sometimes, it's like you know you're hungry, but you don't feel like eating or know what you want... then someone presents you with an incredible feast, foods you'd never even thought of and they leave you to enjoy it to the fullest. This chapter was such a feast.

Everything in the story led up to this moment, his kiss, his claim, and you delivered beautifully. I think that you have achieved perfection. I love that you recognize that Kagome would be somewhat hesitant, a little bashful, but still loving him. I love that Sesshoumaru retains his formitable reserve. But, in spite of themselves, they still manage to come together in the sweetest of ways.

Oh, Author-sama, I bow most respectfully to you. Once again you demonstrate your mastery in the telling of a very real, very human story about very real, very human characters. *bows again with respect*

 

Shippo’s tails were switching so fast, they tangled up behind him. (just a suggestion)


Eryn (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

KYAAAAAAAHH!!!!!


Andrea John (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

i love this story


TKE (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

Beautiful!!!!!


Rin (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

*squeels like a fangirl*

I love this chapter! <3 Thats about all I have to say.


laenfante (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

SQUEEEEE! I have the BIGGEST smile on my face right now. A circled story that feels like the embrace of a close friend; everyone comes home to opened arms.


Catherine (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

Ok, wow. This chapter has to be my favorite so far. So romantic, and so sweet. I love the thing about the trees encouraging lovers, it's so true!


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