Beautiful chapter. I can't believe it's almost over. I'm really looking forward to how you'll end this story. I'm really sad to see it end, but I have no doubt you'll be able to do a wonderful job with the last chapter.
You know how you just feel blah sometimes, it's like you know you're hungry, but you don't feel like eating or know what you want... then someone presents you with an incredible feast, foods you'd never even thought of and they leave you to enjoy it to the fullest. This chapter was such a feast.
Everything in the story led up to this moment, his kiss, his claim, and you delivered beautifully. I think that you have achieved perfection. I love that you recognize that Kagome would be somewhat hesitant, a little bashful, but still loving him. I love that Sesshoumaru retains his formitable reserve. But, in spite of themselves, they still manage to come together in the sweetest of ways.
Oh, Author-sama, I bow most respectfully to you. Once again you demonstrate your mastery in the telling of a very real, very human story about very real, very human characters. *bows again with respect*
Shippo’s tails were switching so fast, they tangled up behind him. (just a suggestion)
Eryn (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011
KYAAAAAAAHH!!!!!
i love this story
TKE (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011
Beautiful!!!!!
Rin (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011
*squeels like a fangirl*
I love this chapter! <3 Thats about all I have to say.
SQUEEEEE! I have the BIGGEST smile on my face right now. A circled story that feels like the embrace of a close friend; everyone comes home to opened arms.
Ok, wow. This chapter has to be my favorite so far. So romantic, and so sweet. I love the thing about the trees encouraging lovers, it's so true!
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