I've love reading this story from the first chapter and while waiting for other chapters I found myself rereading it a coulpe of times...lol. The ending was beautiful!
Oh! I'm just so sad happy emotional lol. I hate endings, but I really didn't hate this one at all. It was subtle, poignant, heart-warming and just wrapped everything up so nicely that I can't really imagine it ending any other way. And I think, best of all (not that your work is ever like this) but it didn't feel forced or rushed- it felt like it came to the only natural conclusion and, really, I can't think of anything else I would have wanted.
Just so wonderful! Thank you for sharing it with us all! I will miss the new story updates, that's for sure!
Ohh man. I'm going to miss Hisoka-sensei, and Shippo, and everyone. Bahhhh :( Now I'm really sad that it's over, but glad that it's over so wonderfully.
MIXED EMOTIONS AHHH.
Well, thanks again :)
C.Nichole
Alyssa (Chapter 100) - Tue 14 Jun 2011
This is absolutely heart-warming. :) I love everything about it, and how you've drawn Kagome and Sesshoumaru together over such a long period of time. It's beautifully written and absolutely lovely. Thanks so much for this gem. Seeing Kagome and Sesshoumaru finally finally together like they should be is very fulfilling. :) Especially after the long journey.
This has been lovely to read. And worth the wait. :) Thanks!
Forthy, thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us. Thank you for all your hard work. Thank you for your patience with all of our begging, nagging and pleading. You are a phenomenal mother, I know this because you haven't killed any of us. LOL!
Now I understand why Chapter Last took so long, it is 26 pages in 9 pt print and 1/2" margins. But such a WONDERFUL 26 pages. You have created a masterful work of art in this story, and one that will be spoken of with the same respect that the best writers' stories receive. You are one of the top writers in fan fiction, it's time to acknowledge this. You are truly, brilliantly gifted with the magic of a storyteller and the skills to communicate that magic to us. Thank you for this enchanting adventure, I eagerly look forward to more wonders from you.
And by the way, Chapter 100 was well worth the wait!
In First Comes Love:
Cloaked in human [guide] guise, Sesshoumaru knelt beside her,
In That's What It's All About:
so she was looking forward to having the pack descend and shake up their normal ?life/lives? for a little while. Just wondering.
Fox (Chapter 100) - Tue 14 Jun 2011
Omfg. I.. I'll take this elsewhere.
This was truly one of my favorite fanfics.
So sad to see it over, but *sigh* what an ending! It honestly made me want to cry I was so happy. You're such an astonishingly talented writer, and every time I see that you've come out with something new, whether it's a chapter or a new story, I get so excited!
My computer is being slow and horrible, but I do hope to do a bit of artwork for your story as well some day. It's just so inspiring, and there are so many scenes that are just dying to be sketched!
Thank you for the immensely enjoyable story! It's always going to be one of my favorites!
araumi (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
amazing read throughout! the ending was great. totally loved the whole story! your fics lifted up my spirits when I'm down. thank you!
Congratulations on finishing a fabulous story!!!!! You worked so hard on this and it really showed. Thank you for the wonderful journey and the ending was icing on the cake. Now I get to go back and reread it in its entirety!!! Can't wait for all of your other stories :)
Breeze (Chapter 100) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
Thank you so much for writing! I'm an avid reader of yours and I must say, you're an excellent author. This was a wonderful ending and the story was amazing. Again, thank you! I know it's not much, but that is all I really wanted to say.
Aw Forthy this is just magnificent! I loved every bit of this last chapter, until I got to the end. Only to realize it's over and I no longer have anything to wait for on Fridays. Thsi fic was such a beautifully written gift and everything about it was wonderful. Every chapter was sweet and special and tingled in my soul. I can't wait to re-read in a few months because of course its one of my favorites and I don't think I can live without for too long.
Dusk (Chapter 100) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
Fantastic! Wonderful, beautiful, creative story. I've waited anxiously for each update since I discovered this story a few months ago. I'm sad to see it end, but we all know that it had to come to a close at some time and the ending was so perfect. This story was so good I feel that some people will be writing their own little continuations about Kagome and Sesshomaru's children and the great life Inuyasha, Rin, their children, and the orphans had created. You're an amazing writer and I look forward to seeing more stories by you! Thanks Forthright, for taking me on this incredible journey!
Jessica (Chapter 100) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
I want you to know that this story was one of the most beautiful fan fictions i have ever read.
Beautifully written as always Forthy. I love this story. It's always sad to see the end of something, but enjoyable as well. I thoroughly enjoyed Unspoiled. What I love about your writing is how it's told in exciting little snippets that never fail to meet my expectations. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. ^_^
kitten (Chapter 100) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
Longest wait ever, buddy! It was totally worth it, though. ;D
Thanks for writting!
Absolutely terrific! I loved all 100 chapters! It was a beautiful tale told with lots of love. Wonderful work!
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