OOH BRILLIANT CHAPTER!

Thanks for the update!

I cannot wait for the next one!

Also, I was wondering, when will Sesshomaru set about impregnating Kagome? Is her fertile time approaching, will he rut with her in a particular manner or location or for a period of time (during or after the completion of the war with Naraku?) to ensure its success etc.

I really loved the end of this chapter, Sesshomaru's smearing of their mixed fluids, and Kagome's groan as he tied with her, does she realise why he does that, and does he keep ejaculating the entire time, or is it merely to contain his seed?

Hahah, at the rate I'm going with these question I'm going to have to put a rating warning on this review I think!

Anyways, I can't wait for the next update!!! ASAP PLEASEEE XD 

*jumping up and down in sit* Next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really really REALLY RRRREEEEAAAALLLLLLLLLLYYYYYY wanna see how all fluffy's crap bites him back!!!!!!!!!!

Keep going or I'll hunt you down *mwahaha*

no but really I like the story so far and the more i read the more i like it, thou i kinda hate fluffy in your story so far and most likely will till his payback comes but thats normal lol ^_^

poor kagome  but i love the story and can not wait for the next chapter and see what next for her and see if she can get an way for him and she will have pup soon.. good luck on the storyand can not wait for more of the story.

I lkie the fic I really do, I'm just curious do you have it all planned out right now? I know you said it might be longer then C&C but I'm just curious as to how long before Kagome gets pregnant? and what happens after I mean does Sesshomaru just take the pups from her and give them to some youkai nurse or something?

I know curiosity killed the cat but  hey sadisfaction brought it back.

I would really like it if, Kagome would willingly do it after awhile, then feel like crap about doing it.  Because, at the moment she has the knowledge that she fought back, but take that away, well you would have a real tortured person on your hands.  I still really like were you are taking this story.

:3

Ah, yes, the pain....the misery.  Poor Kagome.  All I can say is that this harsh treatment of her may come to bite a certain Demon Lord in the a**! 

Beautiful writing, so dark and haunting.  Keep up the good work!

My heart just bleeds for Kagome.  I find it hard to think that Sesshoumaru will ever care for Kagome.  He has been raised to think of humans as less than dirt.  Sure, he's nice to Rin, but she's the only one.   Why does he pretend that things will get better when she accepts her situation.  Is he suddenly going to start to care about her needs?  Listen when she wants or needs something?  No, because she is beneath him.  Even the servants rank about her, his mate, because she is human.  How will he ever get beyond what she cannot change, her humanity?   I certainly hope that she doesn't get pregnant.  Of course, he will blame her for this, but it will really be his fault.  The only thing I hope for if she does get pregnant is that his sons will turn against him.  Hopefully they won't stand to have their mother treated that way.  Or will they hate her for being a human too?  Thank you for the update! 

The chapters of this story never cease to amaze me. I had forgotten about Rin completly, until she was mentioned in this chapter. Wonderful job with writing it, the chapter had a nice flow to it. I don't know why, but hearing the whole  concubine thing really irks me. But I understand it is normal for this period, still I can't help but feel for Kagome. She was forced into this, yet she only has a little girl who sees her in anything but a negative light. N' the male who is abusing her physically and emotionally is sleeping with women and then coming back to fall asleep with her. That defitnly must not feel good. I'm sure if anything numbness in the only thing she is feeling. I'm curious to see the development of this story, and how Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship devlope through the story.

Again this chapter was wonderfully dark. I have a lot of questions going on in my mind in what may come. But I guess I will have to wait for the upcoming chapters for them to be answered XD Also I would like to thank you for not having everyone in the Castle(er home) of Sesshoumaru not instantly like Kagome.(For Demon's existing) You are making this story very realistic, and are keeping the characters in character. Thanks again for writing such a good story. Please update when you get the chance :)

Damn this is some really dark shit! there some dark lemon characters that I just could not read. To me it was way to exteme I mean poor Kagome I hope when she does have a Son or Daugther I hope that the child will learn the truth and hate it's father for of what he did towards to the mother. But come to think of it there was a crazy idea that I was thinking of what if Kagme just couldn't take it anymore and decide to do something crazy like she decides to burn half of her face so Sesshomaru couldn't find her beautyful anymore and won't be able to touch her or worst go completely Mad getting revenge on Inuyasha, Kikyou, and Sesshomaru.