Something tells me Kagome might be wrong about this whole mate candidate thing. lol. I guess only time will tell, though. I wonder if Inuyasha was supposed to touch Sesshoumaru at the same time... Oops. Oh, well. This showdown should be interesting. I look forward to seeing how it plays out.
Thanks for the update!
Crystal (Chapter 14) - Fri 28 Feb 2020
Ah!!! I didn't think I could get anymore excited and at the edge of my seat for this story!! You've proven me wrong with this chapter. Eee! More! More!
It felt so short but wonderful, please please update soon
Update soon!!!!!
susie (Chapter 14) - Thu 27 Feb 2020
Its clear in your writing how much thought you give considering Sesshoumaru's character and what makes him tick. I really enjoy hashing out the particulars with you about our ideas on his past and what he may have been through and why he is the way he is. It helps me in my own writing too, to consider him more deeply and add those layers of nuiance.
I just think about him a lot, and I love how much you care about him too XD It makes for a very interesting/entertaining, even sympathetic boi.
Mecca (Chapter 14) - Thu 27 Feb 2020
This chapter is such an awesome addition to the story, although that Repression guy needs a bit of a kick in the ass and a cease and desist order. I love that Inupapa was incorporated as one of Sesshomaru's emotions. I loved that Kagome leaned into Sess's hand even though he felt nothing; at least he knew he should feel something. Love the new developments! I can't wait to see what Instinct has in store for our poor Kagome. At least in this way, she's fighting for Sesshomaru's feelings, instead of just existing and being wanted just the same. Sess hasn't even been given the chance to court her yet so that needs to happen first! Love your writing, M!
Shelley (Chapter 14) - Thu 27 Feb 2020
Why are these soooo good?!?!?! I anticipate it every week and it breaks my heart that there is never another chapter.
Love all the determination in this. And Inuyasha not wanting to leave her alone. Sesshoumaru's responses to not feeling anything were hilarious!
I really have to take my hat off to you - this entire story is so brilliant. It's such a fun concept! And I think the thing I appreciate the most about this story is that all of the emotions truly feel like aspects of Sesshoumaru. They aren't just emotions, they're how HE would express those emotions, and it's beautifully done.
You could have easily played everything for laughs and made each emotion an extreme representation, but this was far more clever. And what I love even more is that the story still feels light and fun, and there's still loads of humour even while making the emotions mulit-faceted and interesting.
Really, really brilliant work.
I can't wait to see what happens next! Are Kagome and Sesshoumaru going to have to deal with Repression from the outside? Can't wait to find out!
What? Does Repression kill the other emotions? Oh boy! I need more chapters.
So that was how Fantasy born. Wow! I really like the fact that all Sesshomaru’s love/attraction for Kagome commence slow and evolution in something more. That made everything more real.
Hahaha, so Sesshomaru made the same acrobatics demonstration in the “real” world. Fantastic. I love Happiness, he’s the real definition of the sunshine. Damn! Repression is back and apparently, he’s more powerful now.
Koree (Chapter 13) - Fri 21 Feb 2020
Oh no !! Did Repression defeat the other emotions ahhh the suspense is killling me
susie (Chapter 13) - Thu 20 Feb 2020
oh i can't wait for them to hash it out. well, as much as they can with his current limitations...
Oh no....i think Repression got hem all ????
I thunk now it's up to Kagome to help Sesshoumaru realize that she did not do anything, but that it was his decision not to lock away his feelings...
Hopefully she is able to convince him that all the emotions she encountered are a vital part of him and need to he cherished....oh please update a.s.a.p.
Oh no! Now what? This story is so good, it just keeps you on the edge of your seat. Thanks for updating.
What a great story!!!! Update soon!!!!
Love this story. Can't wait to see what is in store. I do hope for a happy ending.
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