This was beautiful. I love seeing her with sadness and innocence as well. I mean I love seeing her with ALL the emotions but it's something about those two that bring out more of 'her' actively connecting VS her reacting to something an emotion did (if that makes sense). Lovely chapter. Oh, and I also love how Sesshomaru is being affected in the outside world (plus catching glimpses). Kagome-sama bout to help him heal from the inside out.
I had fallen behind on reviewing since I had been reading while on the go.
I have to say that you have surprised me with this story in many ways. I like the sweet and naughty air about it. I like that Kagome is being able to see Sesshomaru in a deeper level when he was and is afraid to really show her anything concerning himself because of his own fear of rejection; yet this circumstance has been able to push Kagome into his mind and emotions. And yet everytime I think I know what it going to happen, you amaze me. I don't feel like my expecatiations are being subverted, but that you are going above and beyond with such great creativeness and making scenarios that are memorable and make sense.
Love this story. I think this is an instant classic.
Kreve (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jan 2020
This is beautifully written, can't wait to read more.
susie (Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Jan 2020
See what you make him do, Kagome? You leave the poor boy no choice. :P
And I like the affect that real kags has on him. it's interesting to hear real sess's thought process as his prediciment unfolds. it's sweet how he places the importance of her rescue over his fears of a possible humiliating rejection. and i like how he aknowledges that expecting to purge her from his thoughts after she denounces him is unrealistic.
can't wait for more!
Very revealing chapter...and very spicy! And she got caught! He knew she was there.
Sarah (Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Jan 2020
I love this so much! Like i dieing to read more. But i dont wantr o be like do it now. But i want to . Lol this just so good. I am very much enjoying this!. Thank you once again for sharing.
Shelley (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Jan 2020
I can't wait for your next update! I love reading this story so much... oh you make me cry and smile and feel so much! this is true lay a wonderful story, thank you for sharing.
Wonderful chapter! I love the interactions between Kagome and the other aspects of Sesshomaru's mind. I cannot wait for the next update and keep up the great work!
LadyEsh (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Jan 2020
Hi!
This is by far turning into one of my favorites. Your grasp of the characters and emotions is exquisite and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work. ????
StarryKnight565 (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Jan 2020
Geez, this chapter hit fast and HARD. GOODNESS. It was good though, necessary, I think. Like making your room messier to clean it. I kinda love them ??????
Sadness completely melts my heart. Loved ALL of that. And that final bit of Sesshoumaru divulging a memory to Inuyasha....can't wait to see what happens next!
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