Ah, thank you so much for updating! First, get well soon! I’m sure it was no easy feat to update when you’re not well. It’s an especially difficult time to be unwell, so I wish you loads of R&R. Second, I’m truly, truly enjoying this work. I caught it just a few weeks ago and managed to read straight through. I fell in love with this piece, not only because it has a very original spin on our beloved characters, but also because of the depth and thought that you’ve put into exploring the tangled web of our emotional psyche. I’m impressed with how you’ve taken time to personify each feeling; each one given a distinct meaning and protective function. Each aspect of his being delicately tying each his feelings back to the meaningful events of Sesshoumaru’s life that have shaped and strengthened him. I think I’m most impressed by how you’ve written something so complicated - you’re able to keep the story flow while also beautifully understating the how each part relates to the others. Each feeling is so meaningful and useful when in balance. You’re not only a wonderful writer, but you must also be a very attuned/emotionally awakened being. I’m thrilled to read such a silly / romantic/ intelligent work. Be well ~
hm...... i guess him to beeee.... LUST
maybe... but i've got a hunch
I LOVE THIS
the way you write is awesome, flows so well, and this chapter had me cracking up the whole time lol
"Get with the times, lady" xD
Also, sending you positive healing energy and hoping that you're well <3
Repression bout to get that ass spanked!!! lovely chapter as always! Really enjoy how you write each emotion, memory and experience.
I hope you feel better soon!
This chapter was a lot of fun. It great getting to know Instinct a little better and I especially loved that memory. Sesshoumaru melting when baby InuYasha wrapped his little hand around his finger. Gah! Cuteness overload. Beautiful moment.
Can't wait for the next chapter! And good luck with the move!
Nyuka (Chapter 15) - Mon 16 Mar 2020
This is a very fun story, looking forward to how it all works out X3
Yasss! She won the fight! This chapter was amazing. And when the Instinct said that she was worthy, I was so excited. Oh wow! That memory of the past of Sesshomaru was… strong.
Hahaha, for a moment I thought that Inuyasha will be able to enter in Sesshomaru’s head with Kagome. It was good to know that he couldn’t. Oh! So, his father represents the Dignity, that was unexpected. I thought the same as Kagome that he was the Pride but no. My dear, you always give me a lot of surprises.
I need to add because I forgot...that scene where Sesshoumaru sneaks in to Izayoi and Inuyasha's room when he's a baby and how he changes when Inu grabs his finger - SO precious. Loved it.
Pins and needles! I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru handles what's gone on with her and Instinct when she gets back. In the meantime, I will admit that I am thoroughly hoping that we either see Repression get his butt kicked....or maybe he just needs a hug. lol
Mecca (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Mar 2020
Oh my god, yes!! Love the fact that Kagome can actually have some kind of way to prove that she's worthy of a being like Sesshomaru, and that she can hold her own in a fight - as opposed to just waiting to be rescued. I'm glad she was able to show him that she is not weak, like what Izayoi seemed to be (being a normal run-of-the-mill human and all), and havi little hanyous would be super cute! Half-demon, half spiritual being, aaah! So cute! Plus they're gonna mate because of that mark - wonder what Sesshomaru will think of it when he sees that his actual Instinct gave it to her lol! As much as I can't wait to read the rest of it, I understand real life is a bitch and must be conquered before all else. Much luck on the move and take care of yourself! May you never come into contact with coronavirus! ;)
First and foremost, take care or yourself. Your health and well-being are more important than an update.
And this Was really great! I enjoyed what you did here.
Koree (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Mar 2020
Geez I love this story , each chap gets better & better
Hope you feel better, with everything going on I dont even blame you. Thanks for updating. Also love instinct and pride. kagome was a bad ass this chapter cant wait for more
Sarah (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Mar 2020
This is so good! I love it!
Super chapter! That was great! His beast has always appreciated her first.
Good luck in your new move. It can be stressful but very freeing. Clear out old stuff. We were in the AF, so we moved every three years. It's a great way to declutter. Unfortunately, we are now retired and don't do that so much anymore. That stuff breeds!
Post when you can.
Neelixonee (Chapter 15) - Wed 11 Mar 2020
Loooooved this! Eldritch monstrosity <3
Eris (Chapter 15) - Wed 11 Mar 2020
Oh this chapter was so good! I can't wait for the next!
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