I totally loved this story. I thought it was very sweet.
I'm sure I had the silliest grin on my face the whole time I was reading this one. And that is a very good thing. Fabulous.
VS (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Apr 2018
Hello,
I really have to complement you for this one shot. It was not only well written, but you also found a nice balance between Humor, Danger and Romance. A really nice work!!!
This was bloody awesome! Writing was amazing too!
This was good!! Lol Sesshoumaru peacocking for Kagome was hilarious. I love it! Wonderfully done.
What a delightful one shot. Very nicely done. I loved it. Only one noticeable error, should be tear not tare. (a tear in the silk, a tear on her cheek-same spelling, different pronunciation- confusing, I know). Good job!
Awww I loved it!!! So romantic... Looking forward to more from you!! ;)
nicole (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Apr 2018
Sequel please
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