this was just too cute. cant wait to see Shippo's transformation!
Okay, so I know this fic is complete, but...my god, I could read 1000 more chapters of it. You have a beautiful writing style, and I love how you've constructed these characters and their relationships, and just...everything. It's so good. So yeah, I hope you choose to continue it some day, or continue writing in this universe, because it's just TOO GOOD to be only a two-shot. :)
Rin (Chapter 2) - Sun 15 Jul 2018
Ahhhh. Thank you for writing and sharing this! ♥ So good. Much love sent your way for this.
Rin (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Jul 2018
Oh yes. Very good. I am here at the edge of my seat reading this continually going "yes, good, more of this thank you"
Thank you very much for writing this. It has fullfilled a need in me for seeing this kind of subtle but sure courting. ♥
This was a wonderful little story. Others have complimented on your depiction of Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but I'd also like to compliment you on Shippou as well. Even though he's little, he's still fairly capable of astute observations beyond Kagome sometimes.
I did notice a couple of oddities. Most notably, Grandpa had a 'sweeping brush'. It'd be better to change that to 'broom', because the term caused me to pause in my reading in brief perplexity.
Very pleasantly surprised to see an update for this :). Loved the first instalment and this one was so cute! My favourite bit was Sesshomaru just casually waltzing in and painting her face. I could imagine he was doing it so gently, too <3. Keep up the good work!
Sessygurl (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Jun 2018
Loved every moment. Thanks for the update.
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