I enjoyed the beginning of this story then it devolved into this tale of illogical time jumping using items as time portals.
Frankly it reads like a mishmash of two stories. It cannot decide if it should settle as a romance or an action/adventure. Why is she jumping time? No one seems to know when she will come and go. Readers get the hint that modern Sesshoumaru and modern Shippou are directing the action but it makes no sense why. Is this time traveling a way for Sesshoumaru to delay Kagone's aging until he gets the elixir from Bokuseno?
It is never explained how several items suddenly become time portals. Readers are expected to just accept what is presented to them.
Kagome so far is a useless Lady of the West. She is barely there for her mate, the west and the people. I hope in the next chapter she will actually help save or salvage what is left of the Western Lands. I'm sure it will be a good read, but I decided I cannot continue with this tale anymore.
I tried, but I cannot like this hapless Kagome. I do not recognize her after the first few chapters and do not understand why she cannot find it in her to control her destiny/fate/future.
Skylar (Chapter 14) - Thu 14 Feb 2019
The stronghold!!! Oh no!
Andrea (Chapter 14) - Thu 14 Feb 2019
I agree with Crimson Rose please don't have Sesshoumaru cheat or take a second mate. I have a feeling the priests fighting are going to be Sango and Miroku 's and/or Rin and Kohaku descendants. I wish Kagome would get pregnant by accident.
Wow. I'm scared for her and Sesshoumaru. Obviously Shippo survived but how do the others fair. How long has it been...ugh. I love the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru in this the chemistry is great. I wonder about Inuyasha though, not having Tetsaiga. Thanks for the update.
Orotami (Chapter 14) - Thu 14 Feb 2019
GAH!!! i want to murder something. What a cliff to leave us on! Please update soon! I can't take the suspense!
Yo. it is about to go down!! wtc!! what what what ! as usual, riviting chapter I must say. Kagome can't catch her breath, Inuyasha can't catch a break and Sesshomaru can't catch a nap. tis bout to get lit man this is crazy lol
You gotta keep this going I am invested now
Sayuri (Chapter 13) - Wed 06 Feb 2019
*^* can't wait to read more!
Ok I need the angst but please don’t have Sesshomaru cheat on Kagome or have to take a second mate, I can’t take THAT much angst with this story cause it would literally break my heart since this had such a sweet beginning T___T
Delicious update. Thanks so much. Cheers!
Faith (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Feb 2019
More angst coming up!? I don't know if my heart can handle it...
Great chapter though, and I look forward to more, despite my trepidation at the sadness they may contain.
Orotami (Chapter 13) - Fri 01 Feb 2019
30 years.. wow. Sesshoumaru sure lasted a long time without his mate. How boring and tedious the years must have been. Can't wait for the next chapter!
First off. Glad you updated! Totally wasn't filler. Got to see the eccentricity of Inukimi. Also I legit feel bad for Inu. It's crazy how ....just everything was swept from him. I am a little mad that he didn't pose a threat to Sesshomaru. I was hoping he would be a bit stronger. How is it Naraku is always a threat as a half-breed and now even the humans but never Inuyasha who was made from tougher stuff! I honestly wanted him to land a punch even 10. it baffles my mind. other than that. can't wait for the next chapter as usual. XD
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