uuhhhhhhhh this update was all fairies and roses as well as giggles until the end. truths were told and i got a smack in the face by the reality of time. like uggggg the feels never hit so hard!!
i giggled too much for this entry .....sigh it was like a KYA here and a OMO OMO Otoke! there i was a mess.
anyways twas magnificent overall i enjoyed it immensly! shame it ended so quickly. i even tried to read slower to prolong the inevitable. alas such is the result.
impatiently waiting for the update!
Koree (Chapter 4) - Sun 16 Sep 2018
Awww I’m really enjoying this story, every chap gets better & better with each update!
JasperK (Chapter 4) - Sun 16 Sep 2018
They dance around each othet and the brief touches and moments of closeness are sparks of sudden delight. The remark about time, ow my heart just aches. Poor Sesshaumaru (how brave, foolish and somehow glorious).
Hoping this hasn't been abandoned... looking for more updates!
Eryn (Chapter 4) - Fri 14 Sep 2018
Oh Sesshoumaru.. TT___TT
Really lovely chapter. And I believe if anyone can make time yield to them, it would be Sesshomaru. Inukimi is wickedly delightful. Thanks for updating.
I love this story and the way you depict Sesshomaru/Kagome. Even Sesshomaru’s mother, her personality is mysterious/approachable but also inspires caution.
Why yes, yes he does. Wonderful chapter!
I am loving this so far had an idea for a chapter name testing time or truth of time where Sesshoumaru finds out Kagome is immune to time. please keep up the good work
VS (Chapter 4) - Thu 13 Sep 2018
Hello,
this chapter was super sweet! I loved that you showed us the different sites of Sesshoumaru's personality! And SessMama, the plotting devil, is always the best! ;) I'm sorry for Kagome...she wanted to leave a first good expression at the shiro, but with a disabled leg and crutches, well ... not so.
I'm curious to see how the reaction of the rest will be, now that Sesshoumaru is here too!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Deb (Chapter 4) - Wed 12 Sep 2018
Hmmm.... I can only hope that Kagome gets immortality from the Shikon here so that she isn't lost to Sesshoumaru in a century... Or that full matinng will solve the issue, too.
Overall, though, I like this chapter. Mother-in-laws can be hard to deal with at times, but Kagome handled that like a champ!
Let's see how things progress from here on out.
this was quite the chapter, a mother whom cuts straight to the issue. it will be interesting when all find time doesn't affect Kagome like other humans.
KUDOS!!
Koree (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Sep 2018
Awww I don not know why but the ending made me feel a way :( Sesshomaru rusher to her & reached out only to have his fingers slip there her hair . Great chap
VS (Chapter 3) - Tue 11 Sep 2018
Hello,
this chapter was amazing!!! I loved the idea with Ah-Un :D And like Kagome I was getting really frustrated with "perfect" Sesshoumaru ... but then came the Magic 8 Ball ... and Sesshoumaru failed!!! Hurray!!! I was laughing like mad when he melted that thing!!! Great idea! :)
And it is so sweet of him to redraw her tattoo. He was showing the whole Shiro that he belongs to someone! Stupid Jaken! They will love Kagome, Sesshoumaru will make sure of that!
I'm looking forward to the confrontation of Kagome and Sesshoumaru! He will be mad that she continued the ritual aftet he told her that it is not necessary and even got hurt by it. And he will be mad like hell, because she fleet like that!
Great work!
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