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Lazurite (Chapter 23) - Sun 25 Jan 2015

One step forward, two steps back.


Lazurite (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Jan 2015

Hm... But would Sesshoumaru still think so highly of her if she cast aside Inuyasha for such a reason? 


Lazurite (Chapter 17) - Sat 24 Jan 2015

Mom is quick. I'm suprised Sesshoumaru answered her at the end.


Lazurite (Chapter 16) - Sat 24 Jan 2015

I was wondering where Rin was.


Lazurite (Chapter 7) - Sat 24 Jan 2015

The end of that chapter was sweet.


Lazurite (Chapter 6) - Sat 24 Jan 2015

Where's Sesshoumaru's mom in all this? I figured as the current Hime she'd be pretty important?


Lazurite (Chapter 5) - Sat 24 Jan 2015

Her education does give her a bit of an advantage, yes?


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 36) - Sat 24 Jan 2015
Good, keep it coming Happy New Year

Eva (Chapter 36) - Thu 22 Jan 2015

I have just yesterday taken up reading your lovely story. I enjoy your writing style very much. I love the positive up lifting message throughout. It goes right along with something I've been working on personally, loving one's self and finding yourself worthy of love and respect. We all need to look for the beauty in life instead of wallowing in what isn't going our way. I will definitely be looking into your other works.

In this chapter specifically, I love the way you handled the confrontation with the Southern Lord. It's understandable that Inuyasha, a hanyou Prince, isn't a good political match for the heir to the Southern lands. However, I don't think her father believed she would give up her inheritance so easily, even joyfully. Seeing how ruling can be such a burden, she probably expects to be much happier without the responsibility. I hope he had a back up heir.


naleah (Chapter 36) - Wed 21 Jan 2015

So happy....


Loveyaa (Chapter 36) - Tue 20 Jan 2015

Awww...being kind. Such a little thing with such a big result. I can't wait to see how the last chapter rounds it all out. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


laenfante (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

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Wonderful chapter; beautiful story.


Marie (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

That was so stinking sweet. I'm cryin darnit!  I just can't help it, I need tissue! SOBBING!!!!


northpeach (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

Maru-chan...that really was a beautiful piece of work! A masterpiece! I enjoyed every moment as it captivated me utterly!!


elizabeth (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

this history is very awesome I'm glad that inuyasha is happy


Melissa (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

Loved it. Thank you.


sesshouscat (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

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KEdakumi (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

Awwww.... Such a good chapter. I wonder what those snarky princesses think of Kagome's influence now.


Ankita (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

^_^ lovely especially the part where all the ranks agreed to stay neutral :) that was heart warming 


Moonlit Rose (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

I'm glad to see things are ironning out well for the West. Kagome has gathered acceptance of Sesshoumaru's position and what it means. Sometimes decision will be made that she may not agree with but must accept if she is to be his mate. Sesshoumaru has learned to trust Kagome wholeheartedly. That means realizing that she was not going to run away from him because of every decision he makes that some would feel was ruthless.

I think they both have come to a deeper understanding of themselves and their relationship with each other and that is what manifested in this chapter. I'm glad to see Inuyasha finally get his happy ending. It was well deserved. Once again, Kagome stepped up and the respect she garnered from the ranks prove to be useful and motivating at the same time.

This was somewhat what she was hoping to achieve; a unity that would benefit all ranks. While some are still showing disapproval, the Sho, Gon, Tsu, Dai ranks have proven to be beneficial to her and her to them.

This entire story has been a journey for Kagome, Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and even the ranks. Everyone has benefitted in some way. I'm so sorry to seen this story end. I have never been disappointed with any chapter you have written. This will probably be one of my most favorite stories ever. I usually bookmark stories like this so I can go back and read them days, weeks, even months later.

Your character development has been on point this whole time. I have always loved Sesshoumaru's position in this story. He maintained his role despite his emotional concerns and that is important to me when you are playing with his character.

Kagome is always stubborn but determined when she is trying to achieve something. You highlighted that well. The love she has for friends and the motivation and drive to help them, despite her own feelings; this took us on a emotional rollercoaster ride. I don't think I have ever been this frustrated with Kagome's character ever.

This story has been been fun. I enjoyed going on this journey with you. You continue to prove your creativity and wonder in you other story "His Milestones". Yes, I've been following it. Can't help it you have me hooked on your writings.

I going to hate seeing that last chapter.

Great job. (^_^)

-Moonlight Rose


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