So many things to address in this chapter!
First of all, thank you!
For bringing my Yasha back I mean. You know how I am about dynamical best friendship, and I love seeing the two of them together.
Then there's the fight Kagome and Sesshomaru had in front of Inuyasha. That was beautifully done! Seriously, I totally fell in love.
Then the introductions! That was perfect. My heart ached when he felt he couldn't protect her, but I started to feel better.
Also have to admit, the whole favor scene and Sesshomaru's thoughts after killed me. In a good way. I love seeing the tug and how he didn't like the condition, I just adore it all!
Also, super big fan of the poetic type format you do in the middke of the chapter. It's brilliant work.
All of this is brilliant work!
LOVE!!
inuyasha back and appears just when sesshomaru have feelings for kagome
inuyasha está de vuelta y aparece justo cuando Sesshomaru tienen feelings para kagome
inuyasha is back and appears just when sesshomaru have feslings for kagome
*crouching down shaking*
Oooommmmiiiggggoooshhh
*jumps up high into the air*
That was so awesome!!!!!!!!!
Melissa (Chapter 11) - Wed 25 Jun 2014
I really am enjoying this story keep it up!
There is goes! Subtle acceptance...I love it. But I am curious to see the backlash that Kagome's decisions cause among the more 'traditional' ranks and how these decisions 'tug' (Lol...I had to do it) Sesshoumaru towards Kagome more. Keep up the good work!
Zyren (Chapter 11) - Wed 25 Jun 2014
Will it be explained why it's so terrible that she replaced the Tsu leader? Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha both responded so violently it can't be something as simple as her overstepping her bounds. I'm interested to see where that goes and which rank she wins over next. Or actually I think it would be nice for inuyasha to win over a rank himself.
inufan (Chapter 11) - Wed 25 Jun 2014
i am enjoying this story. This is a new plot i have not seen before. Keep up the good work. this story is mmost interesting.
jenineji (Chapter 11) - Wed 25 Jun 2014
sniff
I love it
Yasmine (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Jun 2014
your story really makes my day, this is truly one of my favourites. I love how you portray sesshoumaru and kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter..
i wondet if lady Inari put kura up to this...
Things are getting interesting, keep it coming.
Oh my even more interesting than the previous chapters!? :D Yay! Lol I can't wait!
Nooo!!! Sesshomaru-sama, what have you done?!?!
*wails*
Noo!! Why?! You were doing so well too!!
GAH!!
*pulls out hair in frustration*
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