What about having Kagome disappear and train, and Sesshomaru and Inuyasha get all bothered?

I know you are asking for help with ideas for this story, so I hope in a round about way I can kick start what you wanted this story to be about.  Before you started writing it, did you have some direction you wanted it to go in?  I'm sure you did and may have not remembered all the details, but think on them for a couple of days.  Free writing will help as well.  How long did you want your story to be?  Did you plan out the chapters with the general ideas from thinking about your original goal?  I already see several paths the main characters can take.  Re-read what you have already posted and break down each individual character.  Only you can decide how you want them to develop and I think breaking it down into smaller parts than looking at the entire, intimidating picture will help.

I will say this.  I sure hope Kagome kicks Sesshomaru's ass by outsmarting and out powering him.  Yes, his character is dominate, and he can still be that way but she needs to best him for a change and let him realize he's not all that (even though he is).  I hope in the next chapter by the time Inuyasha gets home and while Sesshomaru is there Kagome has vanished from their mansion.

i love this story so far i cant wait for the next chapter when kagome cames back and kick thier asses

ah shit/ Inuyasha has it really coming to him now.

I'm loving your story so far! Keep up the good work!

I am enjoying this.  Can't wait for more!

Yes, you're doing the ideas in your own way. It's awesome. I really hate yasha in this one, Kik not so much, she doesnt have much(any) screentime.

cant wait fo 8 .......... and this rhymes

wow, you took my word into consideration an followed them vaguely, i like it

hmmmm...

-(ch6) he comes home, but she's not there and her stuff isn't in the place anymore. He looks for her everywhere but not a trace, he even asks Sesshy (dude doesn't know anything).... in the end finds a note on the bed sayin 'was that whore worth it?'(or smth like that) and the divorce papers under

- (ch7 ) fast forward a couple of weeks. None's still heard nothin from kags, sessh reflects on what happened during that time, his feelings (he's more restless, worried for her?...), his thoughts on inubaka .....

- (ch8)  Inuyasha's been more relaxed, still worried for kags, but pissed at her too. He didn't sign the papers, he even had the gall to move kikyo to their apartment, she sleeps on kags side of the bed, he fucks her in their bed. He gets too relaxed and one day, while sessh's with them (telling him he's a disgrace and to get the whore-bitch out of !Kagome's! place, he also say's that the bastard's blind and dumb to treat kags like that). Inu gets mad (kikyo was there with them)and runs his mouth off (just as sessh was about to leave) ... and at the end A voice asks 'really, inuyasha?'

-(ch9) Kagome sneers at inu and demands he sign those papers, or there will be consequences. inu gets pissed and turns on her. She stands up to him and inuslts him and kikyo with the TRUTH (cheater, whore, worthless, low......) Inu still refusing to sign the papers, sayin he could have them both, kikyo's a much better fuck, Kags has no choice against his word. Kag says she never really unleashed herself in bed with him, he's bad. inu transforms and lunges at her, sessh ready to help, but kagome blasts inu(new terrifying power). ... (get some kik in there too)

- (ch10)The walls are cracking, things flying through the air. she beats inu down in front of them all there, demands he signs the papers. he refuses, kik lunges at her. she beats kik down with one strike, smashing her nose/pretty lying face in the process. Inu fights harder against her in kiks def, that hurts and enrages her, she forces him to sign, and says she'll give him his punishment for being so violent/inhumane/cruel to her, both before and now. She purifies his youkai half and puts a seal on his blood, so that the youkai half can never rise/restore without her allowing it. she then leaves, sessh following after her. (his gazeon her back curious and interested)

-(ch11) sessh's thoughts on the new kagome (spark ;P).... at the and of chap he turns to kags (they're driving in her car)and asks about her enormous power

-(ch12,13) kags flashbacks at the time spent training. feelings, getting over inu, vengence, getting back at him (and proving sessh wrong)....

is that good? XD

KEEP IT UP

I hope Sesshoumaru kicks Inuyasha's butt!!! This story is starting out great. I like the fight between Sesshoumaru and his beast! Keep up the GREAT work!