Missy, I demand you update this at once. Now. Right now.
So update. Now.
I've got to say... I'm both dreading and looking forward to the reunion with Inuyasha. It's somewhat like a movie where you can see the trainwreck is coming.. and you can't watch, but you have to know what happens.
The only thing left to do is compromise, and peek through your fingers.
:)
Sarinea Crawford (Chapter 3) - Sun 13 Feb 2011
like when are u goin 2 put up the next chapter cant wait so pumped
Ashes (Chapter 3) - Mon 07 Feb 2011
Wow... so much tension! I hope you don't leave this fic on the back burner for long, I think I'd have a stroke if I couldn't find out how everything turns out. That's weird, I feel all tingly with apprehension.
Mei Sui Lee (Chapter 3) - Fri 04 Feb 2011
I choosed 2 comment at the end of the story because then is when i can give my full opinion about your story which i found 2 be very interesting no it was drop dead awesome i love it u ur a geat writer but u hav a mistake in the chapter u 4got the i 4 it but i compreeneded it so it did not matter ur story was truly awesome Je l'aime Cette histoire a ete tellement genial j'espere il y a plus et je vias dier mes amis pour lire votre histoire sur Dokuga une fois de plus je l'aime . In case u do not understand wat i just said i speak French and a number of different languagues i said in French that i ur story was awesome and that ireally liked it and i hope there is more and that i love it. U R A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS:hurry and post the other story up i really like ur stories i love them i hope u r inspired by wat i wrote and i hope u writer more
Eek, the moment of truth! The only thing I'm kind of wondering about is...did Inuyasha tell her absolutely nothing about his family? I mean, when she found out who Sesshoumaru's parents were, wouldn't that have tipped her off that she's pretend dating her ex's brother? I'm sure all will be revealed in later chapters. I can't wait! Keep up the good work :)
WOW! I loved it! I've been checking back a lot to see if you've updated the story! It was great, and I DEFINITELY can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you can get it up soon!!!
Thank you for updating, this story is such a favorite of mine, even so early along! Plotwise, I like that the pair decided to change their story, so Kagome is not actually impersonating Kagura. In this chapter, as with the first two, you have demonstrated such a gift with words, such an instinct for providing just the right touch of description or emotion... English teachers want us to avoid using the term "nice", but I want in the worst way to say "nice writing"!
Nosy (Chapter 3) - Fri 04 Feb 2011
Wait so are inuyasha and sesshomaru brothers in this story cuz im kind of confused
WOO!!! Ava!!! I loved the new chapter it was amazing!!! I can't wait to read more lovey!!!
Oh dear... gonna run into inuyasha yet.
This is a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
niecy (Chapter 3) - Fri 04 Feb 2011
This is the first time I have read your story and I just wanted to tell you I'm hooked. Please keep them coming too many good stories go unfinished by their authors and it is totally unfair. By the way it would be cool if you did a couple chapters at a time instead of just one.
rater awesome i love this! >:3 i cant wait to see mor! this plunnie is turning out amazing!
I promised to review one of your stories, so I chose this one. I love the premise... it promises to be quite the bumpy ride with all the many things that could go wrong. Especially when you think about her being preggers with InuYasha's child. Wow, the possibilities are ENDLESS!! That's only part of what makes it so intriguing, though. You have a way of portraying the characters in a very realistic, yet 'in character' fashion. You make them more three-dimensional than they are in even the anime. Couple that with your penchant for throwing them into some very interesting circumstances, and you have a story that will make one TOTALLY forget the outside world for a time. Believe me, this old hag could certainly use a little more escapism and a little less reality at the moment! Thank you for all the hard work you put into your stories so that sponges like myself can enjoy!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Rawr! A sexually-frustrated Sesshy is a total turn on...somehow :P
Anyhoo, I really like where you're taking this story, and Kagome's "situtation" adds a nice touch of drama. Please update soon!
Keep it up!
-LavB
Meara (Chapter 2) - Wed 12 Jan 2011
I definitely think this story is gonna be full of awesomeness and can't wait for the next update. So far so great! The chemistry between these two is golden, there were only a few minor grammatical errors, and the plot just sucks you right in! Definitely looking forward to more and in the meantime, I shall take your advice and proceed to read your other works.
Loveyaa (Chapter 2) - Tue 11 Jan 2011
And things start to heat up. I can't wait for them to actually try and pull this off infront of family and esp Inuyasha. Lets see how that goes esp since Im sure he'll want to rain on the parade as soon as he can. Im sure with the way that Sesshoumaru has been acting it will only intensify and then everybody will be in for a show. Til next time :)
Yum! I love it!
Love this story! It's a different idea and I can't wait to see how things are revealed with his family and so forth! Keep up the good work, and I will be waiting for the next installment!
This chapter was sosososo stressing |: But I loved it, anyway! >3< Who would think that Sesshoumaru could get turned on so easily, eh? LOL.
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