Wow. Just started reading. This story is amazing and you're extremely talented. I hope you will still updat :)
I just got caught up on your last three chapters. Wow! I absolutely adore this story. I enjoy all the thought and detail you've put into every chapter and most importantly, you have kept Sesshomaru in character, slowly and gradually drawing his emotions out. I also enjoy the time traveling you've added. I found it ingenious how you had Kagome travel back in time after her bond with Inuyasha had been broken in order to give Sesshomaru the chance to express his true intentions to her so that it will impact their future selves in a positive way. Now that she is aware he did what he had to in order to save her and Inuyasha's pup. I'm anxious to see how the following chapter plays out. Well done!
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Woohoo I'm caught up! I'm really enjoying the story. There seem to be a couple sticky things plot wise, but perhaps they will be addressed in future chapters? In any case I don't think they are anything that really affect enjoyment of the story.
I am super confused right now... First go around didn't he tell Touga he would train him the day after he sent Kagome back through the well? But now he's obviously with her... And future Sesshoumaru said she returns in three days as his mate... but past Sesshoumaru says he's not going to do that until she knows the truth...?
Whoa! I did not see that coming! So is this going to be a time travel to change the future plot or what happens is what always happened? As much as I prefer the latter, as I'm a very scientific type, I think you would be looking at a couple of big plot holes at this stage. I hate pointing out that sort of thing, especially in a story that is this advanced.
Wait... What's the deal with Shippou? Something other than taking Sesshoumaru to the court?
So this is all just an excuse to get to Sesshoumaru? Is the court afraid of him? I can't really believe they would be any kind of real threat to him.
I don't understand this at all... Shouldn't it be Inuyasha's fault Shiori was hurt if he was careless enough to attack someone while trespassing in someone else's house?
Okay I get the sword draining their energy... But I don't understand how Inuyasha would suddenly fall into a coma several years later after it stopped working when Sesshoumaru killed him and brought him back? Did I miss something?
Okay now I'm even more confused about the Kouga thing.
Yeah I still don't really understand why they can't do an artificial insemination, other than that it makes everything more dramatic and angsty.
That was a weird way of introducing himself... Way to go Sesshoumaru...
Kouga gave his land to Kagome's descendants? Huh what? Shouldn't that say ancestors?
Ah... So that's why he's acting weird...
Jin or Jinenji? Sesshoumaru is confusing... What is he alluding to?
That was intense.
Whoa... that was sudden... Did he even think that through? How does sending her home help?
A schlep uptown? An ace? Those are rather modern expressions for Sesshoumaru, aren't they? Funny though.
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