You, miss JeniNeji, owe me a new laptop (jk)... "“Was it born?” asked Sesshomaru uncharacteristically raising his voice. His eyes were wide and his nose was twitching frantically." <== picturing that made me laugh so hard the water I'd been drinking rushed up and out my nose and out my mough and onto my laptop! LMAO!!!!!!!!!
hmmm i'm not sure i like kagome still, and his mother... well.. someone ought to smack her. it takes 2 to tango, and this might not have been what kagome wanted, but she only cares about sess, i kinda hope momma H gets to smack her. someone SHOULD care about kagome, but then again, kagome's an idiot... so... yeah :\ I kinda wnt to smack them both, poor sess. you still make me crazy!
Miroku has defeintly corrupted Sango XD
:faceplants: Sess-mom?!? Oh High Ones...
Thanks for writing!
make. me. crazy. -nods- ♥
Loveeee :3
But I feel bad that she's so broken :(
-MissKatt :3
i'm so hooked
tease! kagome's really .... immature in this chapter. She hasnt really processed everything and i dunno part of me is all grrrr at her b/c of her childlike selfishness. :\
I would cry too! Booooo to school!!!! Another fantastic chapter!
:\ i really think i hate this version of kaogme, i mean i really get it, she's caught inthe moment, but 5 years from then, she's going to look back at all this like D: " i was such a twat to him!" and sess is rather like a darksaint... kidna like batman -nods-
either way, i really hope that someone beats shiroi, inuyasha, and maybe even kagome a bit... like perhaps, shiori and kagome can get into a fight where they beat the crap out of one another, and inuyasha can get in the middle and then they can beat him up and sess steps in and beats shiori and inu somemore...
o.o perhaps i'm feeling a bit violent towards some of the characters at this time. that only means it's excellent writing b/c i'm only moved towards violent reviews for awesome fiction.
♥ this, more please!
REDWOLF (Chapter 68) - Mon 16 Jan 2012
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!! Whew....Kagome is all messed up sometimes! Why Sesshoumaru wants to deal with all her drama, is beyond me !@-@! Inuyasha seems to be the same selfish little fiend he has always been. This story is FANTASTIC ;)
Love love love love love!!
-le gasp- Inuyasha asked for Kagome? Dun dun dun!
Can't wait for more!!
-MissKatt
Lillian (Chapter 67) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
NO WAY! SIB! WHAT?!! nooo! Inuyasha is not allowed. That jerky jerk jerk!
this fic makes me want to write violent and bad things about some of the characters, mostly inuyasha and kagome for once b/c she's been so idiotic. part of me hopes that kikyo gets inuyasha in some way and that the pup (if one is lost) happens to be inuyasha's or that if nothing else Sess walks away with his pup.
i'm sorry if this sounds mean but you get me all angry with passion and raRr!
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT ALLLLL! Anddddd, as your friend and beta-reader, do you need me to beta?
-MissKatt
*pouts at you* crazy i tell you. seriously i kidna hope sess's kid lives and that he takes it from kagome, and she jsut has to deal with it. i blaim all this on inuyasha nd kikyo though. inu b/c of what he was doing, and kikyo b/c i think her stealing kagome's ability to hate made it so that she can't hate inuyasha no matter what.
avidreader (Chapter 65) - Sun 30 Oct 2011
I am familiar with NaNoWriMo and wish you the best - you have to write so many words during this month, am I correct? Get prepared for 11/1 - and go crazy on writing!
Ah! What a HORRIBLE and PERFECT place to stop...Bahhh! I just read your story from beginning to the present...and man! I will be looking forward to these updates everyday (even if it is not everyday). Oh, and sorry about the death of your male dog. I hope you are faring much better now.
Why would Hion be 1/3 youkai when both his parents are half? Wouldn't he still only be half-human (and a quarter bat demon and a quarter dog demon)?
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