For starters OMG!!!! I was lead here by a fan art on deviant art and i have been reading through every single chapter for the past 3 days! I love it one minute you haveing me hating sesshomaru and then the next minute you have me awwing and going "he is telling her he loves her or atlest cares deeply for her in his own demented way with out knowing it". I have to say this last chapter specifficaly the last few paragrahs had my heat sinking for him he seemed so heart broken and devistated that kagome wouldn't let him near the puppy. Though i understand her i still felt for him :(. I really hope you continue with this and tell us if you move this story someplace else i have to know what happens next and how they reach their happy ending.

I really loved that last part to how Kagome speaks with kenji. I look forward to getting your permission sometime in the future to take some those quotes sand added it to my story. For sure you’ll be credit but I rather get your permission first.

Another good chapter.

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy

Birthing scene** stupid iPhone autocorrect =P

I'm glad you've finally updated. This still holds to be one of my favorites because of all of the great detail you put into each chapter without sounding repeative and boring. I quite enjoyed that for the first time I read a true birthing scebet that Kagome gives birth to a full demon. Usually, whatever the reason of why it's full inu, they are born in their human forms with all of the neccisary markings and what have you first. However, this is how I imagined it would be because they talk about, even in the series, how the dog form is their TRUE forms. Anyways, thank you for keeping the quality of your writing at such a premium level. I hope you continue to update on a more regular basis even after you find another wider girth of fanfiction website. 'till then!

~Aoi

Thank you so much for continuining this! Amazing how I just immediately got into it again after such a long time! Really good, I can't wait to see more. I loved what you did with kagome's (and sesshoumaru's) reaction after the birth. I can't wait to read more!

That was one duuuzy of a chappie. I can't believe how long Kagome's pregnacy was nor how long it took for the pup to be born. 0.0 And I sort of feel bad for Sess but at the same time... I think he deserves being denied what his instincts demand of him. Since it is his own fault that he can't hold his son...  and I think the revelation of what he cost himself due to his cruelty to Kagome is punishment enough for now. Now he sees that when Kagome is in a weakened state, she sees him as an untrustworthy enemy that will harm her children. And I'm guessing that when they do have more children, this same situation will happen again and there's nothing that he can do about it. Hopefully, when she's well-rested then she'll be more reasonable and allow Sesshou to hold the pup.

How many pups will they have before reaching Kagome's time? And will she continue to see their matings as nothing more than his violation of her body? Will she ever come to trust and love him? And I'm curious to see what Sess could possibly do to convince her that his worthy of her trust and love... Now that I think about it, he's slowly changing himself due to being around Kagome so much just like Midoriko said he would. His desire to have Kagome's love and trust is slowly shaping him into hopefully a better person.

I wonder how many things Sesshou will come to regret by the time they reach Kagome's time. I wonder if their children will hate him for his poor treatment of his mother. Or if the Elite Guards and those close to Kagome will finally understand what she has been desperately trying to tell them for so long.

Please keep up the good work and update soon. :P

OMG I Cant wait to find out what happens. i was so happy when i saw that u updated. i just love ur story i keep re-reding it like crazy

hi, new reader here and um, i'm kind of addicted to your story. it's angsty, and all the guilt on sesshomaru...oh, he better receive his just desserts in spades! although the transition of his emotions is a bit sudden, it's very much welcome. so update soon, please? :)

I'm finally leaving a review  after reading this story years ago, please update soon.

wa minute... take down your stories? are you crazy!? NO WAY!! YOU CAN'T!! NOT IF I'VE GOT ANY SAY IN THE MATTER!!

awwwwww... sesshomarus last line there was soooooo sweet *squeel* now UPDATE! and do it soon... please? if you don't youre going to have one very impatiant reader! (I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!) 

Please don't take them down from here, just leave em up so i can keep reading them please! I understand about FF, they only need to add a MA rating and it'd be cool, crap sucks cause i can't find another site like it anywhere else that doesn't specialize like Dokuga. I still love this story so please leave it up even if you never update it again on here.

As most other people have stated, thank you for the update.

It's funny to think of Kagome giving birth to a real puppy.

I have no idea why you want to remove your stories from this site and it's none of my business.  However, I hope you will reconsider.  I think you have a strong fan base at this site.

If you do decide to post elsewhere, have you considered starting a Yahoo group?  That might be better than trying to find a site you like.

I hope you will leave a message on your profile to let us know what you decide to do.

Thank you for sharing with us.  We appreciate it.

      OMG!! I have never been so thrilled to see an update!!  This was one of my favorite stories and I was afraid that you'd decided to stop writing.  As you are one of my all time favorite authors I was very sad, but when I got the email that said you updated this story I couldn't get to it fast enough! You never, never disappoint!! I loved it! I don't care if it makes me sound like a terrible person but I enjoyed seeing Sesshoumaru suffer! He needs to suffer for a long, long time after what he's put Kagome through. 

     Maybe this will be a start for him to truly realize what he could have had from the start if he hadn't been so cruel.  I adored how Kagome snapped at him at the end of the chapter! I've been waiting for that to happen and it was the perfect time.  She's exhausted and sounds crazy, but they are her true thoughts and deeply buried feeling coming to the surface.  I can't wait to see what happens in future chapters.  Hopefully a bit more of Sesshoumaru suffering and Kagome healing!

    As for other sites I'm not sure. I hope your not leaving here but if you do please forward the link.  I don't want to loose one of my favorite authors again! Thank you so much for the incredible update! You and your stories are greatly appreciated!

I'm sure he thought the birthing would cause her to just open up, but I felt that was coming with her snapping at him as she did. Thank you for updating. I have really missed your stories!

Yay! The baby is born! Now how long do you give them until Kagura tries to kill her?

As for another site I have no idea. From what I hear they're going to try to clean up FF (someone reported them for letting ppl post whole sections from HP into stories). Let me know where you move your stories to! Need to be able to follow you ;)

Glad to see you updated. I'm kinda feeling bad for Sesshoumaru. Hopefully now that the pup is born, Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship will improve. It was kinda mean of her to deny him access to his son when she made a comment on how he would be a good father in the same chapter. Their problems shouldn't interfere in the individual relationships that they are try to develop with their son.

I was so surprised when I received my notification email that "The Breeder" had been updated. I had given up on this story ever continuing. I am so happy to see you are writing again. Kagome and Sesshoumaru have had their pup and hopefully now some healing can begin. I loved the new chapter, especially Kagome's insane behavior at the end. Thank you for the update, I look forward to more chapters. :-)

I am so glad you updated this story.  I love the way you are making sesshoumaru suffer^_^ I cannot wait to see where this story leads.  Your stories are among my all time favorites, so if you do move them I hope you will let us all know where they go.

Thank u for the update~ so glad to see him suffering...I wonder how will the pup act towards each of them.