Really well written so far, definitely an interesting tale and cannot wait to read more. The polar changes in some of the personalities was shocking, but the years made it understandable. Certainly looking forward to the next chapter and the war.
This is truly an amazing story. So well done and properly thought out. I adore lore legends and all there is to magic. Having bound everyone to the cause of saving the youkai, (Youkai, yoki are considered like sheep even in plural. The word youkais is wrong. The only reason I know this is the fact that a japanese friend of mine made it clear to me every time I made the same mistake by bopping me on the head.)
Sad that Kagome has to die at the end perhaps the Kami will grace her with life after all that she has acomplished since no other champion could do what Kagome is doing now. I read this story three times already I know your updates are sporadic but please when you have the next chapter up let kagome kick some arse. Oh I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru will do when he finds Kagome in his chambers with Rin. I wonder what Kagome will find about the curse effect on Sesshomaru and why his soul was far off than the others.
Update soon.
Johann (Chapter 16) - Fri 02 Nov 2018
I'm so inlove with this story..hope you get to see this thru the end..tnx for sharing ????
Faith (Chapter 16) - Fri 02 Nov 2018
Wow such an amazing story!!! I can't wait for the next update!
Wow this story is truly captivating. I wanted to review a few times and kept saying on the next chapter I will. That was until I now find myself at the last chapter. Please keep updating. This is epic and should be continued for sure. You have great rhythm with your writing and I can't wait to see what happens.
Oh no, please update the next chapter quickly, like now!
Jamie (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Oct 2018
Holy hell... so worth the wait!
Until that cliffhanger.
Looking forward to seeing what happens with Rin! Hopefully your computer issues are solved soon!
This story always gets me excited when I see an update. It is just so awesome.
Won't Sesshomaru be surprised when he sees his Rin again and all because of Kagome. :)
He will have to go along with the alliance now, don't you think.
I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter...I know it's going to be good.
Thanks for the update and the time it took. I really enjoy reading this story.
that cliffy is going to kill me!!!! Please please update soon!
I am in absolute love with this story! It gives me such Joy and pleasure to read it and even wants me to start work on mine again. I look forward to your next update!????????
What next, what next, what next???!!! :::yelling like a 2 year old ;):::: But really...what happens next? :O
Hi. First thing. I really like this story, and I hope you continue to write it. I am quite intrigued thus far at only 2 chapters in.
That said, I have to ask. Do you have a beta? Do you have someone helping you edit and spotting grammatical errors. I ask because as good as your story is, it is a little difficult to read with the number of grammatical issue I have spotted so far. I keep having to stop and re-read sentences each time I come across one, and that makes it difficult to follow.
If you don't have a beta, I would be glad to help you out. Just drop me a PM if you are interested.
Again, I hope you continue to write this, as it is very interesting.
Blessings,
Jaded Samuri
Ugh! Just when it was getting soooooo good.....a cliff hanger! I love this story and wait on pins and needles for the next chapter. I can’t wait to see how the next chapter plays out! I bet Rin is the reason that he has more of the curse than anyone else.........Can’t wait to find out!
love your story cant wait for the rest of it its so thrilling and exciting left me sitting at the edge of my seat. great job!!!!!!!!
Rocky (Chapter 15) - Sun 30 Sep 2018
Really hope to see a new chapter soon. This is getting good. What will happen now and how long will both Sesshomaru and Kagome be out for. So many questions. Will they try to hurt Kagome while she is unconscious? What about Inuyasha and his sword? What will happen next, I really need to know. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
I would hate to be in Sesshomaru's shoes right now for the simple fact he has a lot of explaining to do...its not going to help his temper.
Got to hand it to Sesshomaru's mother...the sword is the key, but I'll doubt there's no need for it.
Freaking. Amazing. Point blank period. I absolut loved this chapter and the build up for the next one. Can't wait for the next update! :)
Jamie (Chapter 15) - Wed 29 Aug 2018
Wow... Just wow. Your imagination is a wicked place! Loving how this tale is spinning and eagerly await the next update!
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