Damn, that was awesome! I'm curious as to why Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, and Kikyo's reaction seemed strange now that I read the flashback...is it disbelief that she's just alive or something more?
Just read chapter two and was enthralled. I can see why they hated her but she did not desrve what they dished out to her. I am glad that Kagome gets a second chance at life and a new destiny. I think this was her destiny along. Being with the group of so called friends was just a path that she had to take to get to her real destiny with the jewel. Great chapter-great story.
First off before I read chapter two, I must say that this is one story that has caught my attention and fascination. It is intriguing and well written. This will definitely hold me to the end. I love it already. Exciting story chapter to begin with.
Please continue
I like the fact that Kagome still chooses mercy for the people who've betrayed her. It shows great inner strength.
Loved the story so far. Great start can't wait to see were you take it.
This is really interesting! Please update soon! :)
Great started to what seems to be a really great plot. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Tiffany (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2016
SUPER EXCITED TO SEE HOW THIS STORY COMES ALONG!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN EVERYONE TAKES KAGOME OUT TO BE SOME WEAK CREATURE AND SHE COMES BACK WITH A VENGENCE!!!!!
Ashlii (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 May 2016
I really want to know sesshomaru's reaction when he realizes his part in breaking kagome's spirit....
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Wow great beginning to bad 14 chaps of back story. Till next time.
I really hope the other three lords really pick at Kagome's past to throw InuYasha and Kikyo's betrayal in their faces and Sesshomaru's lack of judgement that set this all in motion. In fact if it wasn't for Kikyo firing her arrow at Kagome, those 7 villages would not have been destroyed. Who is the god of death or the evil god?
Aniahs (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 May 2016
Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading Kagome's back story, and how Inu & crew react to her being back and revealing their betrayal.
Very interesting. Hope you will update soon
Zeelian (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2016
You need to take a look at the formating, the text is a complete mess at the moment.
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