It was long and beautifuly written. I loved all the trials Kagome has to through to prove herself and get the jewels for the amulet. Can't wait until she gets to that last mysterious one. I am also waiting for the part how she ended up in Sessho's dungeon and facing her trial. I bet the last book is in the Western Palace. I just love this story.
Excellent writing and imagination.
Awesome story. Hoping for more updates.
Beautifully done. Hope your bf is doing better. Can't wait to read the next chapters!
Natalia (Chapter 7) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
So intense! Half way there! And I know who the last guardian soul mate is Hana! Thx for updating a good fic!
snow (Chapter 7) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
I have been waiting for this story to update its one of my most favorites! its progressing wonderfully and the story telling is exceptional I can't wait to see the next chapters to come I am so fascinated by this story!
I have to say this does have an interesting twist to this. I am getting the sense of foreshadowing of things to come, especially the test Kqgome went through with this guardian, it makes me wonder...hmm...I hope you update soon.
Oh my gosh what a chapter!! I felt so many different emotions in this chapter! This last part even made me cry! I loved every moment of it lol!
Ooooooh this is so interesting!!!
snow (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Sep 2016
:o i love this story! thank you so much for the update i cant wait to read more. i cant wait to see all the things that happen to kagome and how she ends up in demon court with Sesshomaru :o
please update soon!!
Lady T (Chapter 6) - Fri 02 Sep 2016
Love the character and relationship development. I am hoping that she gets to really lay into her so called friends for betraying her and sesshomaru as well for his comments. In a vengeful kind of way I hope they get what they deserve. She would have been better if Naraku was her "friend" at least he was honest about his evilness.
Excited for an update, love the plot, can the next up date be like the next twenty chapters?....just a thought lol
HI, I LOVE THE PLOT TO YOUR FANFIC.......DEFINATELY DIFFERENT FROM ANY I HAVE READ BEFORE....KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB YOU HAVE BEEN DOING ITS A VERY INTERESTING READ....I HOPE YOU INTEND TO COMPLETE THE WHOLE STORY.......MANY START AND DONT FINISH.........I HOPE YOU WILL BE UPDATING WEEKLY..........HINT..HINT........LOL SERIOUSLY THOUGH GREAT WRITING INMY OPINION....................................................................CANT WAIT TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP .................................TDANIEL............................................PS,,,I HOPE...... KIKYO AND INUYASHA,SANGO AND MIROKU ALL PAY FOR THERE BETRAYAL OF THE SHIKON MIKO AND I HOPE...... KAGOME CAN BRING SHIPPO AND KILALA BACK FROM THE DEAD...SINCE IN THE STORY IT SAID SHE CAN BRING PEOPLE BACK FROM THE DEAD........AND I HOPE KILALA SAYS..... SHE WILL STAY WITH KAGOME BECAUSE SANGO AND MIROKU HAD BETRAYED KAGOME ......WHEN KAGOME WAS NOT THE REASON THEY DIED.....IT WAS INUYASHSA ,MIROKU,AND SANGO WHO NEVER OFFERED OR TRIED TO TRAIN KAGOME EVEN WHEN THEY KNEW SHE WAS FROM THE FUTURE AND HAD NEVER BEEN TRAINED SO IT WAS AS MUCH THERE FAULT AS ANYONE ELSES BECAUSE THEY WERE ALWAYS CGASING SHARDS NEVER ALLOWING HER TIME TO REALLY TRAIN.....................................................................................TDANIEL
more,more,more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee
This was a very good chapter. It was enthralling and Ilike how everyone is starting to bond with Kgome. Loving this story and looking forward to future chapters. There were a few grammatical errors but it did not detract from the story in my opinion. It is well written. Great job!
Violla (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Aug 2016
Bellissimo spero che aggiorna più presto possibile. Waw da vero bello.
The plot thickens indeed, what other twist and turns are coming?
Quite enjoyable
I wonder about the book at the Western Palace, how is she going to attain that with her being wanted for the murders of the 7 villages. Will she have to fight Sango and Miroku, if they died and are part of the army of the demanded, I bet that will be a huge wake up call for InuYasha. I can not wait for Kikyo to fail with the attack for the god of the undead.
New update soon? I like this story and look forward to more.
HI , I LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR........GOOD PLOT FOR THE STORY...............I HOPE YOU WILL BE UPDATING OFTEN...........PEOPLE START AND DONT FINISH FANFICS TO MUCH THESE DAYS..........................HOPE TO SEE MANY MORE NEW CHAPTERS UP REALLY SOON..............................................................................................TDANIEL
Wow! Thank you for the chapter! I hope that someone draws a likeness of Kagome in her new outfits as well as her guardians!
I would just like to know if little Rin is allright in this story. Since at least ten years have pased since Kagome first came to India, I am guessing that Rin would be at least 15 years of age, if she started out as a 5 year old in this story. However, I didn't calculate how long Kagome was inside the jewel in the ocean. Of course when she came out of the ocean you mentioned that only a day had passed in the real world so I took that into consideration. As for the present time, 75 years have passed since Kagome left Japan so either Rin is an extremely old woman, mated a demon and got his lifespan, or she has died since then. I am pretty sure that Miroku and Sango have since died, but don't know if they have any decendents. I am just curious if Inuyasha kept in contact with them at all.
As for the trial that Kagome is in now......I am curious as to how the demons figured out that Kagome caused all of those deaths over 75 years ago. Did she leave behind any traces of herself to account for those deaths? Will there be flashes back to the present while Kagome tells her story to the demon court? Or perhaps there will be flashes of memory during those 75 years from Lord Sesshomaru or the others?
I cannot wait to find out more!!!! Please continue soon! Thanks you so much!!! I am so glad that kagome healed those demons! I am sure that the evil one who is killing them will notice her soon!!! I hope that Japan soesn't suffer from that evil!
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