Hey folks!
As some of you may know, I recently started updating my old 2006 story, 1000 Paper Cranes, again. I'm diligently working on it but I'm not getting too much feedback from all the views I'm getting from it? So I thought I would put word out that it's back, officially, and I hope to get some more reviews from it. It's doing well over on FF story alerts and favorite story alerts wise, so I don't know if my writing sucks or if Dokugans just don't review all that much?
It's about how Sesshoumaru's fiancee broke his heart on the day of their wedding, which lead to him becoming the cold and stoic demon we all know and love. He meets Kagome and, right away, he lusts for her, partially because of his vow of celibacy. Even worse when they end up working close together. He as the employer and Kagome as a contestant for the singing competition his company is hosting. Then... he finds out something about the past he's never known before and his whole world shifts before his very eyes.
Second, I've posted up a new story: Destiny, Fate, and Divine Decree. It starts with a separation and then it fast forwards a few years into their first meeting since that day and their spiral into true love... again. It's a tale of how what's meant to be will always find a way.
I'd really appreciate some feedback because I get really doubtful about my ability to write when I see viewings go up, but no reviews. =/
1,000 Paper Cranes:
www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/1179/1
Destiny, Fate, and Divine Decree:
www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/3633/1
Thanks! =]