Very tender and almost bitter-sweet. Sad. I liked it though. Nicely written.
| wow, that tugged at my heart strings. You did a beautiful job of expressing all the emotions involved in death while somehow making the entire tone of the piece very light and hopeful. It was an incredible contrast.
Katja87 (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Jul 2008
| I absolutely loved this! It was so deep and emotional. You could clearly feel and experience all the despair and sadness, and it's quite hard to capture that kind of intensity. Especially with under 400 words! Great job!
| Good job! When you can make the reader depressed you know you've accomplished something!
| Ahhh...you do angst so very, very well. Lovely language and flow.
| This didn't even speak angst to me...it went far beyond that. It was sublime, that suspended dissonance between despair and hope. I loved how ambiguous it was; there's much open to interpretation, and your eloquent, emotive words make this piece stick in the reader's mind long after it's read. Beautiful work.
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