I like all things scientific so your title picked my curiosity. Summary was vague so I looked inside.
My first impression – I found story funny.
Kagome tortures arrogant Seshoumaru with her future knowledge. Inuyasha traded Kagome for Jaken – funny thing. Now Kagome is Sesshy`s retainer instead of toad (lol Seshoumaru treats her nice compared how he treats Jaken). Kagome attempts to train Seshoumaru like she did with Inuyasha. Seshoumaru tolerates this in exchange for knowledge, but takes his revenge by exploiting her human weaknesses. That`s how I see the story anyway…
Interesting and original idea. Amusing story. In some chapters I feel for Seshoumaru, in another – for Kagome.
My most favorite chapter so far is about marshmallow. That was so endearing and somehow warm. And in the end I couldn’t stop laughing.
So, he's still being a sorry looser... Tks... I'm so disappointed with you, Sess!
Oh, really, Sesshoumaru??? Behaving like a spoiled child?? Going to kill the miko just because she got the better from you? Lousy looser!!! Bad doggy!! You should be ashamed!
Now, I wonder about the smell... And I wan't answers!!!
Suniko (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Jun 2011
I LOVE IT! the last ch at the end of ch3 i was laughing my azz off. lol that was a good one! please update soon i want to read more. I can tell that you also like science stuff. i love sci and etc stuff as well. gosh my tv is norm on Sci ch. lol please write more soom. i will be keeping my eye out for it.
suniko
Ow, I just love it! I'm a science girl myself, so I'm really having a lot of fun with all this! Oxidation indeed!
Loved the first three chapters, and this last one....... absolutely hilarius! Good doggie!!
=D
*dies laughing* And then he shredded the Miko!
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 4) - Wed 22 Jun 2011
yeah and he thinks HER head is broken*bursts into laughter* SO FUNNY! SO...is he gonna personally hate marshmallows now or will he become an addict?
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Jun 2011
*snicker* that would be funny...Sesshomaru telling a young Kagome that she was right...hopefully Shippo or someone tailed him and recorded it so Kagome can see it when she's older and can appreciate it better.
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Jun 2011
*cocks eyebrow* wonder how long it'll be before she brings either medical texts or an anatomy for dummies book...or just wacks him in the head with a medical book.*snickers*
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