Great story I can't wait for the next part, it can't come sooner. What will the gang say, how will Kagme yell at Inuyasha when he tries to stop her or will she leave without telling anyone just to meet up with sesshoumaru? Argh so many ways it could go more than I can count. PLease hurry with the next chapter, ;) Much love!
Oh snap! XD That was too funny!
Poor Kagome... stupid 'Yasha. Poor Jaken, he should just now tell her how to take all her soul back. Pleeeeeease update again soon.
headalphafemale (Chapter 33) - Sun 18 Sep 2011
I found the time to catch up with your chapters and all I can say is MORE PLEASE! I'm curious as to how this will all come together? You open up areas of possibilities that could result in some interesting things happening. Thank You, and please continue.
headalphafemale (Chapter 15) - Sun 18 Sep 2011
Interesting, and now is Sesshomaru going to teach Kagome a few interesting things about the male body?? Or was he just teasing?? Good story. I need to find more time to read and soon. Thank you.
it is so so so good.
keep up the good work.
Well I can't say I didn't see that one coming. I DO like however that Jaken is given credit as being intelligent and having the knowledge to Give such advice or direction. It's a nice turn. Normally Myoga is the intelligent one. I like Jaken being given some credit besides just blind loyalty.
Thanks for writing.
EEK! You CAN'T stop there! Where's the next chapter?! What happens? No...No....No..... *goes to find fly swatter to squish evil cliffy*
Why does Inuyasha want Jaken?? Considering Sess is feeling guilty I'm guessing Kags will have her heart broken soon.
I like how he stresses the'half', as in why not want the full demon lol
Diane (Chapter 32) - Fri 09 Sep 2011
Just discovered that you have a plot hole, Inuyasha borrowed Jaken, Jaken was at the palace riding herd on Kagome & Rin & now he's back with Inuyasha?
intrigue!!!
Yay, an update and then another and another!
I'm sure he is up to the challenge but time is so short.. I mean they are already nearly there.
Loving the 'arrogant male' thoughts hehe
TrianaStyx (Chapter 29) - Sun 04 Sep 2011
Aha! I do believe they are beginning to fall for one another! :D So many updates at once! Exciting! Love this story!
criticat (Chapter 29) - Sun 04 Sep 2011
Oh these were absolutely lovely! Especially the last two, I think they are my favourite so far.
I wanted to do DDN very much but fell asleep :( It is quite late in Russia then.
Congrats! :)
I wonder what he is up to. Can't wait to find out!
this was hilarious!
lol he won't let anyone outsmart him, eh? Such an arogant male, but it's not like any man wants to be seen as inferior to a girl :)
Hope she will understand soon that change may be good. Not just because its Sesshomaru we are talking about :)
Rin is quite right, out of the two Sessomaru is the better one for sure.
I like the little lists Kagome makes up, especially the revenge one. His ego would have suffered quite a blow in that case but surely the next question all would as her be 'How do you know the size?' LOL
Aww the ending is so sad. It feels like he was worried and acted but now regrets it. I just know that everything will be ok though.
"She was Rin. It was funny to think her name caused almost the same fear Sesshomaru’s did among the Castle servants."
Ah! the rest was so sad and necessary! i can see him acting like that; being a parent isnt easy because of the discipline part
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