I love your story thus far. Cant wait til you update!!!
OMG. You have me hooked already. I don't usually do reviews, but damn girl. This is already intriguing for me! I even shook my fist and said "DAMN! The END already!!" I like your style of writing, the simple details you put into the story. I read it all, twice. >< You go, girl. Can't wait for next week!
Chibi (Chapter 5) - Thu 21 Apr 2011
| I think you are sitting on a virtual gold mine... This story is fun, witty, I wish my eyes could scroll down the page faster! Your style is good, tone is easy going and familiar... Gold. *****
lara (Chapter 5) - Thu 21 Apr 2011
I only started reading this today as I was a bit fearful to start before anything happened. I love it so far & look forward to the next chapter
martha (Chapter 5) - Thu 21 Apr 2011
ah cliffhanger. but thank you for update
Great chapter! I'm so glad you updated! Oh, I can't wait till next week! XD
KT (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Apr 2011
Love that chapter!!! Who knew worrying over worrying could be so worrying. lol jokes. That was funny.
I can't wait to find out what happens next. O - O I'm all eyes, I will check back every day for your next update!!!! ;)
I love how Kagome makes friends everywhere she goes. Oh and great character portrayal!
Jojo (Chapter 4) - Tue 19 Apr 2011
once i started chapter one i had a feeling i would be angry by chapter four because i fell in love with this story. please keep writing it. its really good and hurtful by the end of the chapter because you wish it was not over.
Diasy (Chapter 4) - Mon 18 Apr 2011
I love where the plot line is going, amazing story I can't wait to read more!
KT (Chapter 4) - Sun 17 Apr 2011
Ah ha!!! no wonder!!!! That was the test! Since rin is treasured so much by sesshoumaru, it makes sense that the concubine would have to be able to get along with her. After all, I believe there are humans who live on sesshoumaru's land.
Wow great work!!! i cant wait to read the next chapter.
I have been waiting for a chapter for SO long and I am VERY glad to hear that you will be uploading another one soon as well :D! As for my review for chapters 4, I like it! I love the intensity you brought to the chapter through a simple game. Also, it's nice to see that Kagome has a someone (Kotono) she can rely on - of course, in time, we shall see how their relationship unfolds. I really like how you keep things moving; you don't waste time on unnecessary parts of the story.
I can only hope that the interactions between Sesshomaru and Kagome will be hot and steamy >D and of course, I cannot wait for the up-coming lemons ;)
Job well done and keep up the great work! :)
P.S. Congrats on the puppy! What did you name him/her?
Thank you so much for updating! Definitely looking forward to the upcoming Chapter this Thursday! <3.
Finally! A long waited for update. I'm so glad! And what a great chapter it was as it displays Kagome's intelligence. Well worth the wait, in my opinion. I'm glad to hear you got a puppy! They are so adorable. I remember those potty training days well. My puppy made quite the mess for the longest time. lol. I'd love to see a picture of him/her. =) And I'm also eagerly awaiting for the next chapter. =)
Remi (Chapter 3) - Sun 17 Apr 2011
This is an amazing story, and I can't wait for you to update. I love the style and I have to say you capture Lord Sesshomaru very well.
janjan (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Feb 2011
awesome! nt o keen on the threesome bt meh nota deal breaker
Nev (Chapter 3) - Fri 25 Feb 2011
So far, this story really has me intrigued! Your writing style is very descriptive without being overbearing, so kudos for that. I can't wait to see what happens next.
amy (Chapter 3) - Fri 25 Feb 2011
WOW,I HOPE HE TAKES HER
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