| Hiiiiiiiii I noticed that your story needs to be fixed a bit and I'd like to offer some suggestions. When people are talking you should put quotation marks around it. For example "I'm just getting warmed up, father." Sesshoumaru said. By the way, you said "wormed" instead of "Warmed" cracked me up because I've been watching a lot of animal planet lately and I kept thinking "What if sesshoumaru had worms?" ... My bad, sorry D: Anyways, I hope that little tidbit helps a bit. Toodles
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