Reviews for Liar, Liar by R.M. Avalon

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SmilingFool (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Jul 2017

Where did you go?  LOVE THE STORY.... PLEASE WRITE MORE.


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 4) - Wed 23 Oct 2013

I'm still patiently waiting :)


MLMonty (Chapter 4) - Wed 08 Jun 2011

No Inuyasha at the reunion?

... hmm


Loveyaa (Chapter 4) - Tue 03 May 2011

I am so glad that you decided to continue this story. I guess the issue of Inuyasha has been cleared up and they have the week without worry about him. Since she is new and a potential mate the intimacy is going to be more intense...intense. I wonder how they will deal with it. It seems like they'll have an easy time getting others to believe that they are really dating and maybe such a good idea that they convience themselves. *squeel* I can't wait to see how things are taken up another level and turn out :)


Amy K (Chapter 4) - Thu 21 Apr 2011

My english is not very good, but this is pure love!!  Daisuki da yo~ ^_^  Kakitsudukete kudasai.  I wait for more.  Ganbare!


suki (Chapter 4) - Thu 21 Apr 2011

Please update!  I've been waiting forever for the 5th chapter, your stories are really great, and I'm dying to know what happens next!


jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Mon 18 Apr 2011

is kagome supposed to be the harpy? wow inuyasha Really is an ass  i wonder if sesshoumaru would find out about kagome being pregos by smell or something anyways keep up the great work i really hope to read more soon ^_^


Fiona (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Apr 2011

Your story is amazing.  Please do continue it!  I've been checking for updates every day since I've read it.  It's very well written compared to others (at least there are minimum grammar/spelling errors).  I can't wait to see what other hilarious things will happen as they continue to spin their lies.  What would the dinner meeting be like?


Rita (Chapter 4) - Mon 04 Apr 2011

I am positively loving your story, I hope that you can continue writing it.  It's different, and I lfind that it's a really refreshing kind of story.


Roos (Chapter 4) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

The story is very interesting so far, I thought at the beginning that this is going to spiral into something cliché but I am really pleasantly surprised and love it so far. I cant wait to see what more touches will happen between the couple :) Thank you for writing!


Anna (Chapter 4) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

This is a very entertaining story! It's a nice web of lies you are snaring them in, and it will be interesting and fun to see how this will end, haha! I wonder how Sesshoumaruwill take it if he finds out Inuyasha got Kagome pregnant.

Just one question: Why doesn't Sesshoumaru have an iPad if he likes to read the news on his iPhone? It's so much simpler in my opinion to read the news on an iPad than on the smaller screenof the iPhone.

I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Ja ne!


MoxyMikki (Chapter 4) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

this is hands down one of the best stories I've ever read. I only just found it, and I'm so glad that I did. I ended up reading it in its entirety, and by the time I was done I was clawing for more! I'm torn about this entire thing with Kagome being pregnant with Sesshomaru's neice or nephew. I pretty much vehemently hate it, but I suppose thats what contributes to making this story so good! There is some part to me that hopeful for the impossible twist that the child isn't inuyasha's, or that she's not pregnant - something. I dunno. And gosh does my heart break for Sesshomaru that he's falling for this girl and she has this huge secret like this. Izayoi was very likable, which I appreciated. I thought the twist that she'd disapointed in Inuyasha's turning out wild to be refreshing. The complexety of Sesshomaru's relationship with her was enjoyable too. I also thought the explanation of how his mother and Touga seperated to be quite brilliant! It was an amicable split for the most part, and everyone involved understood with the exception of Sesshomaru, who as it turns out LOVES his momma and is protective of her (squee! so cute!) I'm DYING to see what Lord Taisho thinks of Kagome and how you'll explain his character/personality. I wonder if he'll question her hiding her smell, and when Sesshomaru will start to wonder about it as well. I look forward to your next update! :)


Blaire (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Wonderful chapter :) I am very much in love with the plot you have going on! Can't wait for the next chapter!!


Soria XD NOT D orignal 1 lol (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

love this chap although i had 2 wait so long it was worth the wait my bf complain i spend more time with my laptop than with him which is funny cause he spend more time playing blackopps than with with me i kick his ass in it thou he is really irritable when i win girls rule like the time we had a bet to see which gender was the best he did'nt get laid 4 a whole month lol i was lmao he could'ent take it anymore and i sat back and enjoyed goin to the spas which he pays 4 he has a prob with me spendin my money . the story u could use tis to make a story . R.M Avalon ur stories r d best i would rite a prompt 4 u anytime even if i doe know u lol lmao


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

STUPID INUYASHA!!! PUPPYBASTA!SNOTNOSEDBRAT THATNEEDSHISHEADCRACKEDOPEN AND HISARSEBEATEN!!!!!!

*WIGGLES C0OKIES WIDLY AND KINDA ANGRILY BC OF DIRTY LYING BASTAYUSHA*

MORE!

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okay now that i got that out, i'm really excited about this chapter it was a good update, and i like the more subtle parts of this, like the fact that they say, as a made up story, that she's recognized as a potintial mate, and this everything was kinda dropped on their laps, but the truth is there, that they really seem to be potiential mates, and that neither of them are noticing it.

I hafta say I'm also VERY VERY pleased that his momma's name is still Hatsumomo, i dunno with a kid named Sesshomaru, i just cant see her having a short overly 'girly' looking for meaning name, even though Hatsumomo means first peach, or something along those lines. Im excited and happy you kept it!

I'm really looking forward to where your going with this, i feel like i know some awesome secret, about the plunnie, but seeing you bring it to life like this just really splits my face in a grin, it's such an awesome fic so far and i cant wait for more!

*wiggles more c0okies at you*

NEXT CHAPTER!

MORE!


Tana_san (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

I must admit, I was just skimming through stories because none of my regulars have posted and after reading these first chapters, I am totally hooked.

I love your descriptiveness of everything. You do just enough to paint a picture without overdoing and making it seem as if you need to fill up the page with something. The Taisho mansion/manor sounds utterly spectacular. As you said, something out of the history books. I can see Sesshoumaru as a lawyer. That's one profession that totally fits his personality.

I can imagine both parents approving of Kagome, she's easily a likable person, but I'm concerned what InuPapa's reaction will be to her being a miko AND I am even more curious as to how InuYasha is going to come into all of this. I do hope that Sesshoumaru will at least tell her his name before Izayoi or InuPapa does.

InuYasha being Kagome's ex, as well as the father of her child is bound to cause trouble but hopefully not before Kagome and Sesshoumaru have time to discuss the matter. Anyway, I'm sure this is going to be quite an interesting story and I've put it in my favs so I can keep up. Like I need to add another story to my list but this is just too inticing to resist.   JEN


CandIcane (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

LOVE IT! Please keep writting I cannot wait for the next chapter!


Etain (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Bwahhahaha! I love it Ava! But i caught another spelling mistake!! >D but I'm sure someone got to it before me >: Cause its 2am now lol.

“Thank you for the tea.” Kagome replied with a smile, he heart going out to the Lady of the West.

TeeHee <3<3<3


addiesmoon (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

love it cant wait for more


Skyisthelimit (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Avaaaaaaaaa darling. I'm soooooooooooo happy you updated....but now, you know what that means, time to harass and nag you again for another :3

Lovely chapter btw - Sesshy and Kag are getting closer and closer very nicely **smirks** 

Oh and euh...I'm kind of hoping it was Kikyou or whoever Inuyasha was cheating with that Iyazoi was talking about, otherwise it would be kind of...awkward. "yeah, er, said harpy is right here :) "

Anyways....UPDATE SOON OR I WILL BE FORCED TO PULL A R0O AND BRIBE YOU WITH COOKIES!


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