Reviews for Cybernetic Mishap by Aki

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Brego Whitecloud (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

This is HILARIOUS!   Love the song thing at the end.  *sigh*  Nerds unite! lol.


yi-chan (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

Hahaha! I'm seriously waiting for one for one of them to accidentally send an email to each other that they didn't want to send.  The ones that kagome wrote in put your hand down my pants would have been hilarious!


michelle (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

this is a really great story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it your a very great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

LOL!!!  Total Eclipse of the Heart?  Really?!  XD  That's just too much...


Time on my hands (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

I have to tell you how much I am enjoying this story. I love the format. I have read dozens of fanfics and published books that told the story via journal entries. I can't say I have ever encountered a story told with emails. The mix is great. It allows you to insert other points of view without disrupting the flow of the story. The pace is good. Not too fast and not too slow. Overall, an incredible job. Looking forward to more.


Sessygurl (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009
I can't wait to see what Kagome thinks of the "date" I wonder who will end up sending an accidental email? I hoe you feel better soon.

Ameire (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

Okay, that's hilarious


Asuka-sama (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

Mongoose! Hah! That was sooo random, and I love it! Great chapter even though it's short. Screw Kouga. Sesshomaru needs to fight for Kagome. I know he can when her since they're both so obviously in love with each other. I've definitely done the ::head on keyboard:: thing quite a few times.

Sess and Naraku crack me up! Total Eclipse of the Heart?! Lol! That was great. :)

I hope you get to feeling better! Update when you can, and I look forward to it! :D


RayRay (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

You...made me snort. I snorted from laughing. Insanely. I snorted while laughing insanely, mostly at the end because I began singing the damn song while picturing Naraku and Sesshomaru listening to it while eating cookie dough. And you know what? Now I want cookie dough. And a d20 spiral necklace my ex has. You see what you make me do? XD You're not good for what sanity I have left my dear, and I'm afraid I may have to rectify that....with a good dose of crack, aka powdered donuts! :D Muahaha, I love you Aki! xD You rock my socks, as does your stories, which I also love! I'm in a loving mood this morning, sorry :P Can't wait to read the next chapter, and I hope you feel better! <3 Much love to you...and some powdered donuts of crack to make you feel better! :D


Sora-chan (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

Arg, I've never really liked Kouga....I dispise him even more now.

Sesshoumaru, Kouga is like a black hole, intresting in concept but empty and void and once your get on the other side, you have no clue where you are.  Save me!

-Kagome

I hope Sesshou tells her how he feels and she drops Kouga...I'll spam you if she doesnt XD lol

much love!

-sora


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

this was totoally amusing, but i wish more would happen, you've got 5 chpaters and only 3 days has moved by and there's a lot of blog/online conversation. i like this, think its interesting but so little is happening. i cant wait to see more. -r0o


Darcy (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

YO! This chapy made my day...errmm..well night I suppose...seing as i'm reading it after a three hour cram marathon...ahhh..here's to almost learning whole text books and forgetting them right after the test!


Mskumiko (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

LOL this story is funny as hell can't wait for more LOL


FangedBeasty (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

Naraku rofl, omg, he is so funny.  I can't wait for him to come out of the closet.  :D


Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Nov 2009

This story is so cute it makes me warm inside. lol I love how their personalities come out in their writings. i wonder if she and Kouga will be eating at the same spot as Sesshomaru?


SakuraDreamHeart (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

XDD HAHAHA THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER! PLEASE CONTINUE I HAD LOADS OF FUN NOT DOING HOMEWORK AND READING THIS 8D!

 

AWESOME JOB! Very creative :D


Kristin (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

really funny chapter!! Kagome is going crazy over the thank you note! lol...I wonder if Kouga and Kagome are going to see Sess at dinner....hm...I'm hoping they do!

Awsome chapter!


Eliza (Chapter 2) - Sat 28 Nov 2009

Hahaha! I really like how you're wriitng this... Can't remember if I said that in my last review... But I think it is really fresh and original. Also, with all the Private Stuff You Can't Read InuYasha! Hahaha!! Now time to read the next two chapters.... :D


SmexyHajiSan (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Nov 2009

HAHA! this chapter made me laugh so hard.... and that last kinky part abot kags gettin sesshy hard wasn't too shabby either ;3 *perverted smile*. Lol keep up the good work hun, I can't wait to see what youll come up with next^^!


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Nov 2009

EEEEPPPP!! Loved this one too, happy belated Turkey day!!


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