Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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SilentlyFuming (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Oh no, it's one of them mean old trees from the wizard of oz, he's gonna throw apples at you, run 'gome, run!

XP  sorry, just a little bit hyper at the moment

Nice update, I'd love to see another!!!  *^_^*


Samantha (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

I just loved how he inched closer to her.  Please update really soon this the best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading.  It just completely different and I honestly check daily to see if you have updated!


Snowfall (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

WooHoo!  Bokuseno!  Can't wait to see if he has anything of interest to say.  I wonder if he has any connections to time.  Aw, Sesshoumaru is so cute.  He's really trying to impress Kagome.  It's going to be sad when he becomes the cold persona that she met in the feudal era.


Connie (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

ahhh cliffie! :D


autumngold (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

I hope that Kagome doesn't start treating Sesshoumaru like a child, I think he likes taking care of her.  Great update!  I can't wait to see what (I can't remember the name of the tree) will have to say.  Please post more soon.


Rowdys girl (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Forthy, you leave me speachless sometimes. Do you have any idea how rare that is? You display such insight into Sesshoumaru the child, so aware of what he must be, the burdens he must carry now to be ready for the burdens he will bear as an adult. And Kagome, coming to see the person behind the Demon Lord. I love Hisoka, though, trying to find ways for his young student/master to be a child and yet never let go his dignity. Such a balancing act! And, as always, so well written!


knifethrower (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Ohhh, it's Bokenbokasku.  Bokenkosu.  The wise tree demon!  Nice!


Saide (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

I'm getting more addicted to this. :3 I really love it! :3


Jess (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

This story is so amazing and cute so far!! And it is beautifully written! I am totally hooked so far :) And young Sesshomaru is sooooo cute!!!!


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 4) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

LOL..OMG! I love this story!! I cannot help but think that a young Sesshoumaru is so adorable. LOL. Lines like..'Why do you keep jumping in? Are you trying to drown yourself? You're not very good at it. or Since you don't belong to anyone, I will keep you. or You are not lost, you are mine. or She is mine, I am keeping her. And my favorite one so far..Should I name her?' GOD, I love it. Absolutely funny. Please continue with this story. It is amazing.


GreyEcho (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

XD

This was like a early christmas gift! XD

Now this is got me thinking on all the possible outcomes for the future. Kinda a sad but sweet chapter...but then again he is going to see her again...just it be when she first came and..gah. I can't wait to see what will happens next... and all the possible things that can ensue on their outdoors trip. :P 


Tilayha (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

Awww, this one was kinda sad. Just had to go and burst Kagome's bubble.


mary (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

it's terribly terribly sad that most of the later chapters are so short! i wan't to read more, i crave to read more, but i can't! too bad i found this thoroughly enjoyable and yet it has to be cut short. must you only do it for the sake of winning contests? *sigh*


serasvictoria666 (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

i'm in love with this fic! can't wait for more. ^-^


mary (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

great first chapter! exciting, intriguing and fun to read! i very much like how you described your characters especially seshomaru as a child and kagome. they are most definitely three dimensional and real, not scripted or pulled by strings by a new puppeteer. 

quite engaging. and so mysterious too. hope to find out later that this is complete. it would be very sad if we were left hanging. 

 

off to further reading then...


Connie (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

awwwh :[ they're already predicting the outcome...sighh

fight it kagome! put those miko powers to use! :P

i wonder how a young sesshoumaru reacts to loss.... :OO


autumngold (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Dec 2009

How sad for Sesshoumaru.  I wonder if he has thought of how quickly Kagome will die compared to him?  I hope he hasn't, maybe he hasn't heard what Hisoka and Katashi were talking about?  Great update.  Hope you have a wonderful holiday season!  :)


SakuraDreamHeart (Chapter 20) - Wed 16 Dec 2009

Wow I adore this story : ) I hope you'll continue! I love the idea of a young Sesshomaru taking care of kagome : )


Madeline (Chapter 20) - Wed 16 Dec 2009

I really do love this story :D


Lady Orrin (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

This story has become one of my favorites!!! I espically like the fact that Little Sess' papa isn't the benevolent human lover that we usually see him portrayed as...hum...I wonder what  kind of impression Kagome will leave on him that will disolve his prejudices???? Its also nice to see what went into making Sess the way he is today. The time travel stories (furher back in time that we are used to) are my favorites. Can't wait for the next update :-)


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