Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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loveyaa (Chapter 43) - Sat 24 Apr 2010

I must say that I quite enjoyed that. The plot thickens. Though I mean we know that Hisoka-sensei survives and lives since we meet  him first in the future. I am just anxiously waiting for the day that Kagome and Sesshoumaru reunite in the future once he knows. I can't wait for the day that she comes back and yet I am dreading it at the same time. I just can't wait until next time to see if we continue with the present or the past :)


Ruriame (Chapter 43) - Sat 24 Apr 2010

Four chapters in one go! Exciting! I wasn't expecting that. Waiting for the next chapter is killing me. I really want to know what's going on, but at the same time, the hinting about what happened is keeping me in a pleasant suspense. The two feelings are battling it out whenever I think about this story. Seeing the product of Kagome's interactions with Sesshoumaru's child self in the current Sesshoumaru is very interesting. I'm very much looking forward to the next update!


DeSoleil (Chapter 43) - Sat 24 Apr 2010

I really had to take a moment to leave you a review to tell you just how much I'm enjoying your story.  I love the progression of characterization that you've done with Sesshoumaru and Kagome in particular, but also for your peripheral characters like Hisoka as well.  The alterations are subtle and comparitively slow to come, and that just makes it all the more believable.  I also very much adore the interaction between the young Sesshoumaru and Kagome.  You can practically taste the connection forming in the words and you've managed to progress the intensity without it seeming trite or nonsensical.

 

I guess, in a nutshell, I really want to just thank you for sharing the product of your imagination.  I'm enjoying it immensely and I can't wait to see where you take it next. :D


taixi (Chapter 43) - Sat 24 Apr 2010

I look forward to this story being updated more than any other.  Each installment is short but so delightful.  And I loved this multi-part chapter (it's like getting four installments in one, plus clever headings to boot).  So Hisoka helped Kagome get home, presumably?  That would have been terrible for Sess to have lost the both of them at the same time - but the alternative is that Hisoka stuck around and lied to Sess re: her whereabouts...which would he ultimately perceive as a bigger betrayal? How embarrassing (but likely enlightening) for Inuyasha to find that Sess' mom has been around all along.


JeniNeji (Chapter 43) - Sat 24 Apr 2010

Ahh! This was an absolutely astoundingly perfect addition :)


haru (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

i love how sesshomaru cares for kagome!! please keep writing,i really wanna know what happens next!!


Lexie (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Hisoka took Kagome? holy shit! what went over my head?

please update!!


Angelicatt (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

The plot thickens...


GreyEcho (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Gah! And the plot thickens. And finish what? *PULLS HAIR* now I REALLY want to know what went down.I am excited to see what will be revealed next.


Mariposa (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Your torturing me! I want to know what happend!! this fic keeps getting more and more confusing...but I still love it.

I cant wait for your next update.


connie (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

ooh its all coming out now :P so eager for more! :D


laenfante (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Leave it to you to use a pat-a-cake rhyme in a bake off! Is that one of the requirements? Enjoyed muchly!


Hesunohana (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

still so great !!! Now, I really wonder what happened ? what did Hisoka-sensei do ?  (cliffhanger...(laugh))

 


Dragoness (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

OMG!!! I so love this story and I didn't think it could get any better.  I was soooo wrong.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  What does he mean he claimed her? Why would the cat take her he seemed so nice? maybe he was just helping her go home. I don't know but I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please, please, please update soon.


SalaA (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Ahhhh!  That chapter was so delightful that I'm in anguish waiting for the next! *faints*

 

 


Samantha (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

Man this story just constanty keeps me on waiting on pins and needles there hasn't been one chapter that has satisfied my curiousity to date because were one is met another is raised.  It's almost toooo darn good!  I love this story you are a remarkable writer with an amazing imagination.  It's a pleasure and privilage to read your work.  Please update soon because this obessed reader is dieing to read more of this fascinating spin on Inuyasha. 


L-desu (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

argh!!!  the two worlds are colliding and we're reaching the pinnacle of plots!  i sit in excitement for the next installment!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

That Sess-Mom! She speaks in riddles. Seriously, I see how the little "plead the fifth" comment goes along with her. It makes me think that she's partly responsible for Kagome leaving the past's past. But then, maybe I'm jumping to conclusions. I love the dialogue between Sesshoumaru and his mother. I love how she feels so... cynical (I think that's the word I want to use).

Can't wait to read more, and I'm thoroughly enjoying this story.

- CA


Janey-jane (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

guh... I'm so terrible about reviewing but you should know that I absolutely LOVE every single chapter of this story (hell, every chapter of everything you write). I'm always impressed by your ability to capture and convey character and personality (particularly impressive in shorter chapters). I also might be working on more fanart for this particular story *whistles innocently* but I'm waiting to see how the story progresses before finalizing designs...


LM Bluejay (Chapter 43) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

LOL! And the plot thickens!!!


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