Reviews for The Breeder by Texanlady

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erai (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

WoooHooo! New chapter. LOVED IT! Finally Kagome blows up at Inuyasha. I also really like the plot development with the kamis and the idea of the new destiny. I love how Kagome's destiny has CHANGED due to Inuyasha's actions. It's an idea you don't see as often as you should. Splendid work. I also love how Sesshomarou is being so considerate of Kagome's health, even if he's not considerate of her emotional state. Update soon!

 

Love, and cookies, and moofins!


Sala (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Great chapter.   I hope Sesshoumaru reflects upon what Midori told him and doesn't just assume that he is currently walking the proper path.  And I look forward to scenes with Kagome, Miroku, Sango and Shippo. 


Sally Po (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

You have just made my weekend.  Seriously.  I was so excited about this update that I literally started jumping up and down.

You, my friend, did not disappoint.

I have been on the edge of my seat waiting for the confrontation between Inuyasha and Kagome, and it was everything I'd hoped it would be.  More, even, because I thought that kind hearted Kagome would be reduced to tears.  But she held her head high and BROKE Inuyasha.  The only thing missing was a compounded SIT.  But even a SIT couldn't have hurt him as much as her words and the symbolic breaking of his necklace did.  You are a literary genius.

I hope Kagome manages to get away from Sesshoumaru.  It would serve him right having to go through the centuries alone as penence for his crimes.  But if Kagome DOES manage to get through the well, I hope she somehow is able to take Shippou with her.  It would be an awful fate to leave her little kit with Sesshoumaru!  And I keep worrying what will happen to Kaede if Kagome manages to get away.  Will the old Miko be punished?

As always, wonderful chapter, and thank you for updating so quickly!  It was very much appreciated, and we all eagerly await the next addition.


Claire (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Bravo!!!!!!!  lol I have to say that im glad kagome slapped the U know what out of Inuyasha... serves him right!! that was an excellent chapter, please update soon!!!!!


Miss.Undo (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

inyasha can just cry her a river serves him right and kikyo can just drop dead already! shesshy, well i hope he makes the right choice and please uodate soon i cant wait till the next chapter! ")


laenfante (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Ooh...hmmm...ouch! This chapter was absolutely AMAZING! The breaking of the rosary was a true inspiration, and beautifully written. All the emotions - Kagome's rage, Inuyasha's pain, the group's shock, and Sesshomaru's gloating - came through with such clarity. Your ability to show emotive scenes like this is what makes you such a good writer. You've won a loyal follower in me!


Madeline (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Yeah Inuyasha see how dumb you've been!! Great chapter I'm glad Kagome slapped the crap out of Inu. Please keep up the great work and update as soon as you can!! :D


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

WOW! That was pretty harsh, but Inuyasha kind of had this coming. I kind of feel bad for him. Now he has to live with the fact that he no longer has Kagome in his life and it's all because of his stupidity and Kikyo's selfish ways. It's good that she can never have children, though I'm sure the idiot would want some in the future. But I don't think we've seen the last of them, though Kagome kicked Inuyasha to the curb, especially that evil bitch. I have a feeling that she has somthing up her sleeve in regards to Sesshomaru and Kagome. She DID say that she would make him pay for taking the Shikon after it was mildly purified. What a better way than to become a dark miko and come after Kagome when she's pregnant. I hope the Kamis aren't too harsh on Inuyasha. I know in time, he will become a changed man after he's paid for the dumbest mistake he's ever made in his life. And I'm sure Miroku and Sango have already turned their backs on Inuyasha. Sango DID make it clear that she couldn't stand 'that bitch'. Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter. Make Inuyasha pay, but don't be too hard. He needs to seek some kind of redemption. Hopefully, he'll dump the bitch like a very bad habit and see her for what she truly is.


AmaViarra (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Once again I am amazed by your writing skill. i loved this chapter, and the last too. This chapter was wonderful and a good interaction between characters. I liked the look into the characters thoughts, along with the raw emotion that showed in this chapter.

 

i am looking forward to what else you have planned for this story. Take care, and keep up the good work!!


AmaViarra (Chapter 19) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

sorry about not reviewing for a long time, most of your chapters left me speachless and i couldn't figure out how to word my thoughts into a proper review.

This story gets better as the chapter goes on. You can see the characters maturing, and I think your wonderful writing skill plays an important part in that. You know how to write and get the readers attention all through out the chapter. I'm just in awe, at this story and how you write each chapter. It's wonderful.

I also like the progress between the two main characters(kagome and Sesshoumaru) Even though thier relationship is still tense. It is wonderful to watch as they grow, and as their thoughts begin to change. While Kagome is stubborn on not accepting Sesshoumaru(Which is nice, considering what he had done to her) But their interaction with one another has become less tense and awkward. They are actually communicating now instead of Sesshoumaru trying to rule over Kagome. He is now letting her speak more and showing more emotion to her.

That being said. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters to this story, Please keep up the good work. This is one  of my favorite Kagome/Sesshoumaru stories.

 


Rowdys girl (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Tex, I am moved to tears. This was an incredibly powerful chapter. Don't change a word of it. The emotions are so raw, so bitter, so fierce. You laid their hearts open. I see Inuyasha picking up the beads and claws of his rosary and taking them with him to restring and wear as a painful reminder of what he did and what he lost - his true love. A love that no longer exists. And Kagome now has something to hold on to: Midoriko's words, her promise that, though the way will be hard, one day Kagome will have all the love that she deserves. And the revelation before them all that Kagome is the chosen of the Kami... Hope and bitter pain. To tell you the truth, I feel as stunned by this as if you had slammed my head into a wall. I will have to read this a few times before I can see past the action. This incredibly perturbing, emotional and satisfying chapter is why I've been following your story, THIS is storytelling at its best!


Night (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Thank you very much for the update.....I am really looking forward to the next chapter:) please update soon.


Night (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

I am glad for Kagome's outburst and Inuyasha's suffering, but i am also hoping to see Sesshomaru suffer. 


jk-chan (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

thank you so much for your update i was so happy when kagome told inuyasha off. i also can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work!


nogooddeed (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

I don't know your plans but is this going to be a long story because I need to know. I love your Tru Blood stories but Sesshoumaru

and Kagome are where my heart belongs. There stories were the first fan fiction I have ever read, so is it going to be a long story?

Okay tears running down my face when Kagome confronted Inuyasha, finally he learns what he did to Kagome. But is

Sesshoumaru ever going to learn to love Kagome and more importantly is Kagome going to love Sesshoumaru? So many questions

is Sesshoumaru going to go to the future and see that nothing changed, or what does is mean if the future stayed the same. And

how long is Sesshoumaru going to posses Kagome until he learns that he need her love?  Okay please update soon!!


Kavi (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

WOAH!! THIS CHAPTER WAS MASSIVE!!!. WELL FREAKING DONE!!!! wow, this was my turning point, keeping up with this story has been truly amazing, what a wonderful wonderful story make sure you keep it up, please feed the hungry soon!!!!!!


Mskumiko (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

I got to say for writing this a t 4am you did great. I like the chapter a lot and don't think it need to be change it fit good witht he story. It also look like Sesshomaru is starting to open up and care for his little breeder a lot. great work keep it up


REDWOLF (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

 I am so proud of Kagome, I hope you at least, for your loyal readers, let us know of Inuyasha and Kikyo's suffering(and I hope they suffer much). I hope when her collar comes off, Sesshoumaru feels like an ass and is brought down to the dog he is!! Great chapter and Fantastic story! 


autumngold (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Too bad Sesshoumaru won't listen to what Midoriko said.  Too bad he still doesn't care enough for Kagome to realize the truth of her words.  As for Inuyasha, he is so lucky.  If I was Kagome, I would let him know how much pain I was in.  How much it hurt to be raped and abused by his brother.  But, it's good that Kagome had too much pride to do so.  Nothing would have changed, and it would have made Sesshoumaru mad.  Thank you for the update!  Was there a reason that Midoriko kissed Kagome?  Was it just for comfort, or did it give her some power back?  Please post again soon!


Katrina (Chapter 21) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Sorry, I forgot to mention that I was kind of shocked when Midoriko she said “The power of the Kamis you seek lies in the heart of their miko.  It cannot be taken.  It will be yours when you prove worthy of it.” and I was like "What...that it? no justice, no pushiment and he get away with it of what he just did to Kagome, and what he made her do".

So disgusting, I mean for real Sesshomaru starting to piss me off even more right now in this fanfic. But I won't forget that you said that you might change it. So, I'll try to keep my cool and read the chapter again in case you do change it.


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