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SmilingFool (Chapter 13) - Thu 10 Feb 2022

Oh man that was good.  I also read The Fang and the Flower love it as well...  Anyways, you almost had me there reading that poem...  Gosh, at least they are accepting and will grow to love but I still feel the ex plans to do something that will call Sesshomaru out so he can expose him after seeing his red eyes....  Wonder what family he is from and what if Sesshomaru just uses his poison to make the dude disappear...  That would save all.  Anyways, again my two cents are in...  I can't wait for more from this story....


hw (Chapter 12) - Tue 08 Feb 2022

Oh poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru! I feel so bad for them. I hope they're able to have another conversation about it soon and work out their guilt and hurt and anger to heal each other. I just wanna hug them both. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 12) - Tue 08 Feb 2022

you write it so beautifully an so sad for this conversation, i really can feel the sad and the emotion, what sesshoumaru feels and what kagome's feels. thank oyu for the good chapter!! 


Ard (Chapter 12) - Tue 08 Feb 2022

 

I am moved to review lol There is just so much to say on this latest development because the general theme is relateable to both genders albeit more commonly to females. 

A lot of women blame themselves for the actions of others due to social conditioning. We think we are being logical when we say someone mistreated us because we deserved it for the way we were in that moment or are as a person in general. Fearful, dependent, emotional, too trusting, needy etc. The truth is, courtesy and respect is default behavior. Its not something you earn unlike trust. Anyone treating you otherwise reflects their poor upbringing OR character shortcomings. Ofcource, no one is perfect but that does not mean you cannot civilly disagree and come to a mutual understanding that does not compromise principles. You get educated or worldly exposure to mature this way.

People who frequently get angry or are abusive (verbally, physically, emotionally) in relationships are actually refusing to
1. Work on their shortcomings
2. Address the actual issues bothering them in a level headed manner 
3. Bring themselves out of a superiority/inferiority complex.
This is an indication of their unreliability as an individual. Run far away from a person who periodically exhibits these traits; lies, breaks their word, poor safekeeper, gets angry easily, verbally assaultive, a stingy miser.
The list is not meant to be exhaustive, im sure i missed some.

Logic is subjective.
You can know something but having an understanding of it or experiencing it are separate things. The lesson learned when you are hit hard is never forgotten.

Forgive yourself for not believing the signs the other person is blatantly displaying through their words and actions as to who they trully are. Everyone gets fooled sooner or later. Usually mutlitple times if you are living a long life. 

As far as Sesshoumaru is concerned, Kagome will realise his only crime is in taking so long to approach her. Everything else was destiny and her choices, good or bad. A wise person may have trust issues because of past ordeals but they dont dole out resentment , certainly not where its not belonging or originating from in the first place. 

To any person out there who has gone through hell, forgive yourself and strive towards moving forward. Ores go through a purification process for metal extraction.

To any person out there who has raged hell on other peoples lives and are reading this, seek forgiveness sincerely, move on choosing to be a better person by being a better version of you.
Looking forward to you completing this fic. You got some serious writing skills. Keep it up !

 


Young Kagome (Chapter 12) - Tue 08 Feb 2022

Aww he keeps running away! 


Resendriya (Chapter 12) - Tue 08 Feb 2022

Nangis baca nya... Ga bisa berkata apa2


SmilingFool (Chapter 12) - Mon 07 Feb 2022

Oh man that was tough...  Being beaten daily or telling yourself this is the lesser of two evils by having sex to wear him out is an instinct to protect the babe.  Though life is never roses and diamonds we live how we can manage until the time when come close to breaking and leaving that life behind.  Sometimes we find ourselves worthless that no one would want someone like ourselves.  But to find a love so out of reach that could have saved the family she lost or kept her from being with the man who'd eventually kill her.  I'd say it'll be a long day of regret for the both of them coming to terms and eventually loving each other and starting a new life.  So one day her ex will cross her path again so he could try to beat her or expose Sesshomaru for what he is so he could ruin her marriage and life once again.  Update soon can't wait to read more.


Kimiko (Chapter 12) - Mon 07 Feb 2022

This story is written beautifully. You can feel both of their pain, especially in this chapter. I feel so horribly for both of them - Kagome for the family and child she lost, as well as her loneliness, and Sesshomaru for feeling like he is a coward and that he should have done more. They are exactly what each other needs, especially now. I know all to well the desire for a baby, after dealing with infertility for the last 6+ years. And while I have not experienced abuse or miscarriage, I feel Kagome's pain acutely here. I look forward to seeing how they mend and develop their relationship, and hopefully learn that their experiences will make them stronger together.


D (Chapter 11) - Mon 07 Feb 2022

Wow. .. I cried Kagome. Felt amazing she could tell story twice in one day! Such amazing chapter. So ready for more. This was so thoughtful and in love with this story.


Angervo (Chapter 11) - Mon 07 Feb 2022

Phew! I am so happy that Kagome is safe and she had a good talk with her mother-in-law. I was half convinced that she would just run blindly in the snow and eventually get lost or hurt herself or something. Now she needs to have a talk with Sesshomaru too - maybe she will finally start healing then. Thank you so much for this lovely story! 


Resendriya (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Feb 2022

Wah... Ternyata org Indonesia!!! What a great story, kak!! 

Cerita nya bagusss, feel nya dapet banget. Cara nulisnya juga asik. 

Mudah2an akan banyak kejutan nanti yak... 

Semangat kakak...!!! Ditunggu updatenya ????????


neelixo (Chapter 11) - Mon 07 Feb 2022

Guilt can sometimes be a formidable feeling to drown out, even if it's misplaced.  What a wonderful and heartfelt handling of it.


Young Kagome (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Feb 2022

The warning at the beginning was much needed. Great chapter!


SmilingFool (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Feb 2022

Oh that was a wonderful chapter loved it....  At least Kagome is safe,   Now her mother in law knows what happened and now Kagome can heal with Sesshomaru's help....  Hope the man bugs Kagome like I said in an earilier review so Sesshomaru can get some justice for Kagome and a peace of mind for him.


Buttercream (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Feb 2022

Good that Kagome reached out to talk to  Sesshomaru's  mother  for help.   Now she can stop blaming herself for what happened to her baby.   Can not wait to see what Sesshomaru will do to her ex.


Nicole (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Feb 2022

Omgggg I cried so much reading this. Another amazing read like always. Can't wait for the next update


Nicole (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Feb 2022

Omgggg I cried so much reading this. Another amazing read like always. Can't wait for the next update


Aeleana (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Feb 2022

Oh my gosh this story is unreeeeeeaaal! ???????? The angst, the love, the patient, the agony, the heartache, I feel it all like it is my own. The character development is believable, the non-dialogue enjoyable and dialogue poignant. Everything feels purposeful, every line and every word. I seriously haven't read such a well crafted story in sometime,  can't wait for more ????


Curly Elephant (Chapter 10) - Sun 30 Jan 2022

Ugh, you are such a tease! Leaving on cliff hangers like this! I love it, thank you. I how you enjoy writing, because we enjoy reading. <3


Angervo (Chapter 10) - Sun 30 Jan 2022

Oh no, I hope nothing happens to her before Sesshomaru is able to track her (good thing that he is a dog demon, shouldn't take him too long). Good thing that he now knows her secret - but it is his turn to be honest now! 


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