this was a nice short story, but it felt a little undone. like ir wasn't finished. i take it you don't like writing lemons and that's fine. stories can be done without them. i think instead of saying they are MA, maybe you should change the rating to M. i've read 2 of your stories so far and they should be labeled as M. all in all, this story was lovely. having sess's mom test her was genius. she loves her son very much and only wants the best for him. i'm glad she liked kagome's spirit. if you plan to write more for this story i'll make sure to read it when and if you do so. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
Mecca (Chapter 3) - Thu 06 Aug 2020
oof. Having babies with Sesshoumaru has got to be one of the best things a girl could ever hope for. Just trying for babies is fun, so Kagome really could not do better. Lucky gal ;) And picturing Inuyasha banging some rando hahaha that mental image would've just haunted me, but I'm sure the thought of railing Sesshoumaru on the reg is a great way to get over that. Thumbs all the way up!
I want to read more of this one.
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