Lol too cute! And I love that he experienced timelines as well. Makes it more likely that he'd appreciate their connection when they finally came together. I'm also curious if she didn't go up to him, when they returned, would she have gone up to her? Lol
Oh, and the talk during sex was nice to see. Their questions and differences. I don't see many stories mention stretch marks or anything...normal! So thank you! <3
Kawaiiiiiii lol I had to reread a few chapters just to indulge myself. Thank you for your work this is a beautiful tale
Aawww!!! That story was amazing!!! Im soo glad they finally found eachother!!! And i love how they ended up eventually meeting eachother in diff timelines. Greats write!! Keep up the great work! I also like how sensual he is!!
Ohh emm gee! You have out done yourself... god this chapter was beautiful!! Ijs.. I totally think Toga/ inupapa was behind it! Solely cause i like to think of him causing behind the scenes mischief
Jade (Chapter 10) - Mon 21 Sep 2020
YAY!!! Its awesome we got to see some of Sesshomarus travels too!
Natalia (Chapter 10) - Mon 21 Sep 2020
A beautiful fic. A beautiful ending.
One of the best I have read in a while.
Thank you!
you're great writer.. .this is the story i've been waiting for. .. kagome with other pairing. all of your story are out of ordinary.. .it's great. .. i hope the story is a half way to the end. don't end it soon. . make it longer. thank you
Jaewyn (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Sep 2020
I have to stay that this is one of the best fics I've read in a while. I'm always antsy for another chapter to come out. Best type of sign for a well written fic.
Keep up the awesome work!!!
Allison (Chapter 9) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
This chapter was everything!! Sesshomaru coming after Kagome at first wanted to know where his mate was showed just how deep he truly loved Kagome. I wonder if any of the other husbands would have had that intense of response. My thoughts nope!! I like their talk about everything and Kagome explaining that she is really her just a younger version. When Sesshomaru started to hear of the other husband and got a little possessive and jealous and kissed her passionately. Loved that part. I loved what he said about not wanting to hear about any other husbands because he didn't want to think about any version of himself not trying to be with her. That was so romantic to me and you could see he really loved her.
I loved Kagome's talk to her older self and seeing who she could really become by loving herself and being truly loved by a great man. I loved Sesshomaru surprising her at the end and saying he loved her like she requested. He did it his way as he told her. Your plot ideas are always so imaginative, and great to go along the ride with as a reader. So a big thank you for all your hard work on this story. Can't wait to see how it ends.
Mecca (Chapter 9) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
Mythicamagic, howww in the world are you such a freaking genius to come up with these stories?? We are not worthy! *bowing and scraping ensues* I loved this chapter, probably my favorite thus far. I love how Sess remembered to tell her he loved her, without much fan fare, but knew it was what she needed before he "saw her off" and now I can't wait to see how she will woo the Sess of her world, minus butt groping (until later surely), but maybe moko-moko stroking? Thank you so much for the update! I love for them <3
That turned out so lovely! And older Kagome was popping!!! I love to see how highly others saw her and also how highly she saw herself. Your stories are just amazing! I would love to read a story from you where Sesshomaru has to win/woo Kagome, if you wouldn't mind? Maybe not even necessarily that plot but something where he has to experience a journey of some kind (like the incredibly creatives ones you've sent her on)? I completely understand if that's not your cup of tea though and still appreciate these amazing realities you continue to share <3
Kai (Chapter 9) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
Too sweet T_T thank you so much for taking the time to write this!
Love this story. Can't wait to see her attempts at wooing Sesshoumaru.
I do find it interesting that in every timeline (except the one where he dies), he is around her in some way, in whatever way she allows, or showing help and support how ever he is able. (Like buying tea even with his mates disapproval.). Makes me wonder if he already has feelings for Kagome.
While thinking of this story, I thought it would be interesting if Sesshoumaru went through different timelines. Who would be his mate options? But I came to the conclusion that he'd probably mess them up, most likely by beheading those around him. ????.
Great story! Love your writing.
Hooka (Chapter 5) - Wed 16 Sep 2020
My favorite paragraph of this chapter was the comparison of Sesshomaru to not the moon but of the sun.???? I love how you wrote it. Thank you for getting me back into reading fanfiction after a decade hiatus! You reminded me of why I fell in love with this couple.
Aww im crying for our kagome, you captured the emotion perfectly I loved it cant wait for your next chapter
Omg!! It was beautiful!!! I am sooo happy to have gotten to read it! I love herself and him kinda giving her a heads up for his younger self!! Ohhh these last 2 chapers are my hearttt you manage to outdo yourself each time!!!
Dammit you made me cry. That was simply beautiful, effortless and such a graceful chapter. I loved every second of it! Thank you, I'm so excited to read what comes next!
desje (Chapter 9) - Tue 15 Sep 2020
Omggg girl. That was steaming. Can't wait to see the relationship develop in her own world. Loved it ??????
This writing makes me wish that this kind of love is real. You are breaking my heart. I love every minute it.
Oh please please please let us see kagome and Sesshoumaru woo each other pleeeaaassseee
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