Ok! I've calmed down enough to make a decent review lol. First off, let me say:
OH
MY
GOD!!!
Anyway! The Jinenji marriage was very sweet and gentle. I like how Kagome realized that their love was still romantic, and that not all marriages have to be physical. Also, that there's love in their silence. They were very content with each other, but I think she realized that even though Jinenji is sweet, that's not what she wants in a partner. I liked that realization in her.
Also, learning more about Yua! I really thought her backstory was very good! Uncommon youkai!
Kohaku! That was an interesting marriage choice for Kagome. They definitely have a spark, but imo, it feels like Kagome is still very maternal to him. While Kohaku is strong in personality, Naraku really messed him up, and Kagome's gentle nature is good for helping him find his ground again.
I like that Kagome is starting to contemplate what life would be like with Sesshoumaru. lol and that little hit of envy/jealously/surprise? at him being married in the Jinenji universe. Girl, you better snag him quick! He's a prize!
ALSO SESSHOUMARU IS DEAD?! LIKE, DEAD?! Myth, I legit SCREAMED when I read that part. lol I was as shocked as Kagome was lol. And her urging Yua to take her to that dark timeline, omg. I ABSOLUTELY cannot wait to see how she handles Naraku, that slippery bastard. Also, his little entrance quip was *chef's kiss*. "What big eyes you have." Oooooooh, gave me chills!
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this. Hang in there, Kagome!
Keep up the great work, Myth! <33333
I dont think you know how much I am OBSESSED with this story. ITS AMAZING. I keep wondering how many more husband ootions there are till we get to sesshoumaru. and I REALLY hope you give us a few chapters of Kagome back in her timeline, going after whoever she chooses (sessh obv)
Kouga is a good husband and also very sexual, for a moment I thought that Kagome will hit him to stop that hot moment, lol.
Well, if Kagome and Miroku are fine with that kind of relationship it won't be necessary to say something, also is their relationship, not mine, so it's not my problem if they want to be in an open relationship.
Kouga would make a good husband! After getting the whole eating people thing lol.
I am so glad everyone was talking about this story so much that I had to go read it.
I love Miroku. And this chapter was great.
Thanks for the story!
Lauren (Chapter 5) - Thu 20 Aug 2020
Just when I thought they'd be Sesshomaru-free for one test drive, Kagome sent him a letter. ???? I think I'm more upset because Kagome had a caring family and a sweet husband and mate in Koga and she still wrote that letter. What's wrong with her? It's one thing to have a husband who was overbearing or uncaring or treated you with disrespect, but Kouga was none of those things. He wasn't confused by anything but her lack of knowledge events, so it wasn't as if they'd been drifting apart and Kagome fell into the mix and half-way mended an already broken relationship by straining the importance of better communication. Kagome's unhappiness makes no sense. Who's satisfied and still asks for more?
All I know is that Kagome better not break Jinenji's heart! The big sweetheart might die.
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