Hey jade reallly good chapter a little short but that's okay. there is on thing that i was confused about. " I dropped of Rin and you..." the of in this sentance doesn't make scence but i can't figure out if you where trying to say off or for or something like that. other than that little thing this was a pretty good chapter.
Thanks for everything,
E

This was REALLY,REALLY,REALLY good. Please make another one. Well not one but a lot more. I really loved this,and when i thought it was,another chapter i was dissapointed when there wasn't one. So please please make more! Thanks

This was REALLY,REALLY,REALLY good. Please make another one. Well not one but a lot more. I really loved this,and when i thought it was,another chapter i was dissapointed when there wasn't one. So please please make more! Thanks

Hey Jade if you're looking for a beta i'll be one if you just send a chapter to my e-mail address then i'll see if i can fix some of the spelling mistakes. btw your story is great and i don't think your going to fast your going the way you think you should be going. Keep on Keepin' on and get back to me about the beta thing.
Thanks for the story,
E

25 MORE REVEIWS!!!!!u actually want that much 4 1 lil chap!!!!!GOSH!authors!anwayz...luv ur story!!!!keep the chaps comin!!!!i really hope u get 25 more reveis brcause i want another chap!!!
ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

plz write more you've got a really good story going so far keep going with the flow try not to be like me and get major writers block keep on keepin' on

Really good story so far. You had some spelling errors and stuff, but over all it was really well put together. You may want to put a little more detail in it. Hanyou, youkai are the demon spellings.

lol i really enjoy this story please bring the next chapter soon

please write more

i like it so far i think its cute. u put an unexpected twist when you said that Yura was Kikyou's sister. but it was trally good none the less.