This was one hell of a lemony fic. Man, I haven't read something this great in a long while. Kags is so damn lucky. I'm jealous. That's never happened b4. Anyways, keep up the wicked awesome work. :P

this is awsome i love it please please keep going

OMG I am so happy that your going to write a sequal to What your eyes can do. I squeeled when I read your note about it and the teaser has sure wet my appetite. I must say your my favorite fan fiction writer. *bows down to greatness*

Another good story from you.You always come up with something unique,exciting and interesting plot.I'm glad you'll be doing a sequel bec I'm not into cliffy ending.I'll be waiting for your next story.

you have to write more i want to know what sesshoumaru's reacttion is when he see kagome with inuyasha

really loved this one shot and i'm really happy that there is gunna be a sequel! i am really looking forward to it!!!!

I am SO glad you have decided to do a sequel to this story. I know it will turn out to be amazing!

hey, this was an awesome one-shot. So good I actually logged in to review. If you knew me you'd know how rare that is. Anyways, I would love it if you'd make another oneshot or turn this fic into an actual story. Nothing too long if you don't want to but it definately has potiential.

I really enjoyed this. You should write one more chapter to finish it b/c it feels like it should continue.

i love this story u have 2 continue!!!!!!

ive always wanted to write a fic to that song but i could never get it to turn out right. You nailed it. That was absolutely amazing. Are you planning on writing a sequel or anything? You definately should. Let me know. I would love to read more. E-mail me and let ne know if you plan on writing more. P.s. Sorry for any spelling mistakes, i read my fanfics on my phone.

are you sure it's complete?
cuz i really don't think so.
you've got room for a sequel,and it'd be an interesting read if you did.
i know i'd read it.
if not,hey...i begged.

oh please tell me you were just joking and this isnt finished! i have to know if he finds her! oie! your so good at sucking readers into your stories! you are by far my favorite author...please please dont leave me hanging like that...poor sessy

Very nice fic, and I usually don't read song fics. I both love and hate how they just missed eachother in the end! Good stuff!!!

OMG!! What happened, they missed each by a span of heartbeats..but ain' t that the way life, miss true love by the strand of hair or past right by you!! Such messy web we weave!! Mean spiders the fates are!! *Sigh* I hope he finds her, I must know!!

nice story! but the ending waasn't too clear...it seemed really abupt and incomplete...i mean..he just enters the mansion as she leaves with inuyasha, and he think about how he wants to see her again..and then..nothing! so..really...i dunno..it left me totally unsatisfied at the end.but then again, i really am not ig on open endings like that one, lol! so how about it, how about a sequel? in which they meet up again, and get together for good, just as the summary promises??? hmmm? please? oh yeah...brownie points for keeping them casually horny, and in character at the same time! ;-)

Wow, wow, wow~! Ok wow doesn't even cover how wonderfully this was written! And Please tell my you are kidding about this being a one shot?!? You can't just leave it there, leave us all hanging like this? Come on!!! You HAVE to write more. No 'If', 'Ands', or 'Buts'! PLEASE~!

~Yumi

no no no no NO! you are not ending this as a one-shot. I will haunt you until you post more to this. PLEASE! ~sobbing~ please. post. more. to. it.
post soon. (good god I hope mine turn out half as good)

hugs and puppies

Awesome story! Me like-y =). More!! more!!!

Really is it the end? Aw come on that just isn't right, meaney! :P It was so good to, it's really not fair to leave it hangin' like that.

:)

-FangedBeasty

And it's a one-shot?!?! I really hope that you decide to write more to it. That was so hot!!! I loved it!

Well I don't usually read songfics simply because I doubt I'll know the song, I stopped listening to most newer music when rap came along *shudder*, but I figured since it was you I'd read it anyway. I really liked it despite not knowing the song or even the name/artist since I didn't see that info anywhere, usually that's put up in the disclaimer, I would like to see more of this, maybe not a songfic chapter though to see if Sess ever finds Kagome. In this case a 2 to 4 shot would be nice if you don't want to expand this into a full fic since you're already working on 2 full fics that I really like BTW, 2 shots are good.

is this a one shot? i dont know whats going on because that doesnt sound like an ending and you have it on compleat i hope it isnt an ending i love this story and its not something i wanna see end at all i will cry if it doesnt get an update i really like it

I love it. I honestly hope that you'll continue this story. The ending didn't feel like an ending at all.

wow that was amazing!!! that is all i can say about it. Though please consider doing a seqal oneshot to this. WOW simply WOW

OMG!! That was the best! You haveto write a sequel!! Sesshoumaru has to find her..PLEASE!!

WS

OMG that was great but you can't leave it like THAT!!!! you have to do more. I have to find out if they meet again or not. that was one of the best one shot I have ever read. *on hands and knees* please continue.

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww poor sesshoumaru plase macka sequle where he and koagome end up being together

Whoa, what can I say? Nice or wow? Hmm, I think both fit. =D

OMG!!! That was the hottest story I've ever read!! Not to mention Paralized is one of my most favourite songs!! I was singing along as the story progressed. LOL! But I found the ending to be very sad for Sesshoumaru! Poor Sesshy!!

Love the one shot but the ending makes me craving more I must say. Its almost like you make it seem you can continue. Anyways I love all your fan fics wonderful job.

Wow, that was amazing. I have no idea what the person who rated flow and org as a 7 was thinking, it worked very well. Delicious lemony goodness! And while I hate to be THAT reviewer, and I know you planned this as a one shot, it would make an amazing longer story...especially with her going to be staying at the mansion and all the wonderful butting of heads I'm sure would ensue. I really kind of hope you do it, I would love to read it. So much so that I'm actually sending a review, something I don't often do. I loved it, and I hope you move it on!

Yay, I get to be the first to review! Hehe

Anyways, absolutely wonderful! You certainly have a way with words and I hope that you plan on continuing this story.

OOOOhhh I hope you will write a sequel to it! You have to!!!

Oh my...I am already enthralled with just the first chapter.....Keep them coming...Your work is outstanding....!!! Thanks!

Ohhh you should make this one-shot longer, I know it would turn out to be a really good story. So keep up the job well done and I can't wait to read more so your stories in the future.

Awesome. I like.

you should write on more to fallow this. It is really good and a fun read. keep up the good work.