Reviews for Courtesy Call by Tally Mark
highonsugar- Sun 20 Apr 2008
wow that was amazing !!!!
I've read all your stories and they are beautifully written, they are funny, intelligent, original, the list goes on and on.....
I don't ask for a sequel, I think it's fine the way it is, and writing more will be difficult and too OOC.
But then again continue writing it if you wish, because you'll do a good job anyways.
I won't say no to more stories though !!! YOur stories are funny, with a slight angst side and they are PERFECT!!!!
So please, I'm begging you, WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've read all your stories and they are beautifully written, they are funny, intelligent, original, the list goes on and on.....
I don't ask for a sequel, I think it's fine the way it is, and writing more will be difficult and too OOC.
But then again continue writing it if you wish, because you'll do a good job anyways.
I won't say no to more stories though !!! YOur stories are funny, with a slight angst side and they are PERFECT!!!!
So please, I'm begging you, WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Michi- Fri 18 Apr 2008
I love how you set up the whole story, and I think that it's probably the best Sesshoumaru portrayal I've seen! *going off to vote for you in the Annual Awards*
Nikki-kun- Sun 06 Apr 2008
That was so good! Please follow it up!
Syd- Thu 06 Mar 2008
I really love this story. I've read it many times. I read a lot of fanfiction, but almost never read a story more than once. But it seems every time I read this one I fall in love with your Sesshoumaru. I would love to read a sequel/prequel, although for this story one really isn't necessary. Thanks for writing it!
iloveprettysilverhair- Wed 20 Feb 2008
Wonderful! The last line gave me chills, I absolutely loved it! Congrats on your win!
RadioActiveOrange- Sun 17 Feb 2008
Two fanfics made me cry. Yours is one of them. >_> I need to know what happens next (CLICHE I KNOW). -__-
helleboros- Sat 16 Feb 2008
Wow. This is quite beautiful. Thank you for this. It was a pleasure to read.
The Happy Hentai- Sun 03 Feb 2008
Deep. Totally engrossing and sensual. Thank you.
ixxora-hime (too lazy to log in)- Sun 27 Jan 2008
first off, i wanna comment about that part where sesshy made love to an old woman's body..*shivers* that was one picture i did not need in my head (no offense though)
i love the story!!!..esp when sesshy said that "for her, i shall defeat time"..omg.
i'd turn goo if someone would say that about me..soooo romantic
okay i'm yapping..
i just wanna tell ya that..
it's too darn good for a one-shot..!!!
you got all the plot you need there to have a fantastic story!
so if you change yer mind..
UPDATE!!!!
and soon!
instantly!
now!
lol
please?
purdy purdy please?
i'll give you cookies!
oh and my sesshy plushy!
please?
^^,
ja ne
i love the story!!!..esp when sesshy said that "for her, i shall defeat time"..omg.
i'd turn goo if someone would say that about me..soooo romantic
okay i'm yapping..
i just wanna tell ya that..
it's too darn good for a one-shot..!!!
you got all the plot you need there to have a fantastic story!
so if you change yer mind..
UPDATE!!!!
and soon!
instantly!
now!
lol
please?
purdy purdy please?
i'll give you cookies!
oh and my sesshy plushy!
please?
^^,
ja ne
ixxora-hime (too lazy to log in)- Sun 27 Jan 2008
first off, i wanna comment about that part where sesshy made love to an old woman's body..*shivers* that was one picture i did not need in my head (no offense though)
i love the story!!!..esp when sesshy said that "for her, i shall defeat time"..omg.
i'd turn goo if someone would say that about me..soooo romantic
okay i'm yapping..
i just wanna tell ya that..
it's too darn good for a one-shot..!!!
you got all the plot you need there to have a fantastic story!
so if you change yer mind..
UPDATE!!!!
and soon!
instantly!
now!
lol
please?
purdy purdy please?
i'll give you cookies!
oh and my sesshy plushy!
please?
^^,
ja ne
i love the story!!!..esp when sesshy said that "for her, i shall defeat time"..omg.
i'd turn goo if someone would say that about me..soooo romantic
okay i'm yapping..
i just wanna tell ya that..
it's too darn good for a one-shot..!!!
you got all the plot you need there to have a fantastic story!
so if you change yer mind..
UPDATE!!!!
and soon!
instantly!
now!
lol
please?
purdy purdy please?
i'll give you cookies!
oh and my sesshy plushy!
please?
^^,
ja ne
Kyuthe- Sun 27 Jan 2008
holy shit.
*ahem. Translation: that was mind blowingly awesome. I cried. and in the end, I felt vendicated. Time be damned.
*ahem. Translation: that was mind blowingly awesome. I cried. and in the end, I felt vendicated. Time be damned.
Odango- Sat 26 Jan 2008
Please add more to this it is too good to leave as a one shot...you should do a series and an alter net reality thing og what "NOW" was happening on the other side of them well XD
Chaos_Queen77- Fri 25 Jan 2008
WOW!!!! that pretty cool, except he did just change time by having it removed prematurely... oh well, that love for ya!
Chaos
Chaos
piratequeen0405- Fri 25 Jan 2008
Wow. Really good. Sad, sweet. And I don't know if I'm stupid, but I honestly didn't see it coming that he would remove the shikon, keeping her in the present, wishing on it. I loved it.
Kelli- Fri 25 Jan 2008
Awe... I thought this was a very beautiful and very well written one-shot. I thought you portrayed Sesshoumaru and Kagome perfectly. I think this could have been turned into a multi-chapter story, but I think you made a good call leaving it as a one-shot.
Mutnodjmet- Fri 25 Jan 2008
This was a very enjoyable story to read but please say you have a sequel in mind.
I hate being left hanging at the end of a story. It makes my brain hurt to try and think of all the possibilities of what could have happened *winks w/evil grin*...(just kidding)
Excellent writing.
*hugs and smiles*
I hate being left hanging at the end of a story. It makes my brain hurt to try and think of all the possibilities of what could have happened *winks w/evil grin*...(just kidding)
Excellent writing.
*hugs and smiles*
gigi- Fri 25 Jan 2008
I like it!
Amy- Fri 25 Jan 2008
This story was fantastic! You have done a rare thing of taking a love story between two fantastic characters and made it your own. Good job!
JBella- Fri 25 Jan 2008
Amazing job, but...one-shot!?!? Oh, c'mon, i -have- to know what happens next! Leave this as a one-shot if you must, but please-oh-please write a sequel.
BlueMoonOrchid- Fri 25 Jan 2008
OMG that is such an open ending. You made it so you could continue it if you wanted to. *hint*hint*
inugurl620- Fri 25 Jan 2008
a very good one-shot! this made me cry. i loved it and i love sesshoumaru's attitude towards the whole situation. time be damned.
Alyssa- Fri 25 Jan 2008
Good one-shot! I really enjoyed how you ended it aswell.
Thanks for the great read.
-Alyssa
Thanks for the great read.
-Alyssa