i luv ur story

I'm totally in love with this story! I like how Kagome and Sesshomaru flirt. hehehe I can't wait for more interaction between the two.

I'm totally in love with this story! I like how Kagome and Sesshomaru flirt. hehehe I can't wait for more interaction between the two.

this fic seems like it will be fun!

Ok, I'm Going to Be Honest Ok?

1- Your Spelling Stinks. As You Know, Just Reading Through What You Write Before You Post It Will Fix Some of That.

2- Its Not 'Know' Its 'Now' Thats 1 Word You ALWAYS Mess Up.

3- You Let the Story Run By Dialog. Talk About the Rooms Their In, What Their Wearing, Their Facial Expressions, and the Way They Think.

4- You Don't Explain Things Very Well, It's Choppy, and Hard to Understand. I Find Myself Having to Throw My Brain 4 Different Directions Whenever I Read It.

5- Your Plot Is Great!!!! It Makes An AMAZING Story Line!! -♥

Just Work On the Things I Told You About, and More People Will Want to Read Your Fic!! Please Ask Me About Anything You Don't Understand, and You Can Look At My Latest Fic If You Don't Understand How to Do Numbers 1-4. (I'm Currently Writing a Real Book of My Own, So I Know What I'm Talking About, Althogh I'm No Where NEAR Perfect!!) Good Luck, and Happy Writing! :]

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

OMG i sooooo love your story it is really good i hope u up-date soon ^-^ U ROCK!!!!

OMG i sooooo love your story it is really good i hope u up-date soon ^-^ U ROCK!!!!

well i like the story keep the updates coming please

hello, i love this story but, there is just two things that i need to ask you to fix. You confused 'know' and 'now' as well as your sentence structure is weak, But the story has a lot of potential and, i hope you update soon.
Mitsukai

this story cool i like it better i love it and thanks for explain cuz i was kinda confuse but i get it now. I can't wait till you update

[please write more